Naruto: Becoming a master taijutsu using martial arts.
Author: DaoistPKVKG6
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Waking up with no memory of the previous day is bad enough, but waking up in a world you thought was fictional? That’s a whole other level. Well, at least our poor guy woke up in Konoha during a vaguely familiar era. After all, it could be worse—he could’ve woken up in the Kirigakure or Sunagakure, and he really hates sand. Kenshin is definitely in a wild ride as he tries not to lose his mind and survive in a village where orphans often get into Danzo’s little secret club. At least he has a system, right? Wait... does he have a system?
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Hi everyone! I'm the writer of this story, and I really hope you enjoy it. As I mentioned in the chapters, please forgive me for any grammatical errors—English is not my native language, and in fact, not many people speak it in my country. Writing this story has been a lot of fun, and I hope you like it!
It's Review time! Well, let's begin with the writing quality. It isn't bad but the 1st person pov is annoying. It's like reading a diary. I think that 3rd person would suit it better. As for the story and character development, it is still in the early stages, the mc has graduated from the academy. We will see how it will go. ad for world building nothing groundbreaking it is the same, for now. Anyway, I have noticed that the author is a beginner like me so good luck and you have room for improvement. Good Luck.
Really like it so far! MC was a bit arrogant towards the start but he grew out of it which is goated. I think this will be pretty good overall
I mess with the story the main character kinda got a unique personality can’t wait to see more in the future
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