As a Gamer In DxD World

Average, or maybe slightly below average. Too much plot hole from the story 1. Mc got a cook skill book but he couldn't cook, even just to cut a vegetable he couldn't do it. 2. Somehow he able to use magic, sword etc even tho he never learned to do it or have a skill about it 3. He have auto regen, he's able to heal the injury from the monster in his dungeon but he couldn't heal his hand from his cooking practice, even after he got a magic item to double his regeneration. 4. Koneko is hard to befriend with, but somehow mc able to befriend her the first time they meet, to the point she became a talkative person different from her canon 5. Mc character is fluctuate, change from one after another, he said he like to cause trouble, brave enough to skip some class and fight other but every time he meet koneko he becomes coward. 6. The letter from the Unknown deity is annoying, usually that kind of thing only happen once, when mc reincarnated, but in this ff every time something new happen mc always got some letter

writing quality is average, the story has many plot holes, some scenes are never explained and written but it's explained with that happend, tge mc's personality shifts constantly

next Gamer fanfiction whose intelligence Stat is worth shit.

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overall the mc is braindead who also happens to be a bitch. he stutters and shi all the time because of koneko. he has no backbone when it comes to talking to ppl. it feels like he doesn't know the nature of characters but knows the plot. he got a cooking skill for the first novice gift and within the next couple chapter simply doesn't know how to cut vegetables like wtf. grammar is fine tho so if this is something you like go for it but im officially out

Inconsistent, out of character / unreal behavior for in-world characters, MC is an isekai that has somehow inherited a memories of physical and emotional abuse which is brought up a bunch and its so fucking cringe. MC has fast stat growth but the stats don't mean shit. MC has skills like cooking but still can't cook and self-harms while cooking. Writing quality is mid

DROPPED THE MOMENT HE LET OTHER IN THE DUNGEON DONT CARE IF THEY ARE DATING ITS PURE STUPID

It is a fun reading even if it deviates from my usual selfish cocky protagonists that I normally enjoy for fanfics. It should be warned the mc comes from an abusive family before reincarnation and it does impact the story so if you aren’t into that stuff, it would probably be best to avoid this. (I am not sure if this is a spoiler or not be the signs are everywhere and it was revealed early on). Also, the main(?) romance in my opinion was a bit rushed but that stuff doesn’t really bother me but it is something that some people may not like. /shrug

Each work, story, and writing improves with new things

It was starting off strong, good writing quality and stability of updates and a nice premise. Then it started Spoilers ahead (I will try to be vague) He gets a skill book that is supposedly going to make him be good at that certain thing as if he was doing it for years. Well fuck you - that doesn't happen and he fucking injures himself all the time like an amateur trying to do it. Random trauma dump like barely anything led up to it just 1 chapter "I'm much sad" then the others learn through it through power of bullshit ROB his love interest (he knew her for like 2 days only in school) barges into his house (How she knows his address I don't know) they have a cry and whatever and suddenly they both love each other man what, then he suddenly gets a something that no one in history ever got and its OP as fuck and everyone just accepts it. Also he fought someone at the beginning and killed him with like no hesitation (Whereas the trauma for killing a sentient being) using skills he got from a skill book meaning that skills do work its just that 1 particular 1 that doesn't. Overall everything feels rushed there doesn't seem to be concrete like plan to this story and author just slaps whatever edgy/cringe/cliché thing he can. Ill still read it maybe it will get better in future chapters (Currently 26) and I have nothing better to do.

I started reading this and it was over before i noticed it. I am not sure on update times but the story itself has promise. It's not some OP MC yet. But in all its a pretty good read. None of the he/she him/her swaps which i find completely annoying. But anyways if u want to kill some time give it a try.

عالییییییی خیلی عالیه ادامه بده من واقعا این رو دوست دارم گیمر با پتانسیل ترین مهارت دنیا دارای امکانات نامحدود اون رو نباید فقط به یه دنیا محدود کنی به دنیاهای دیگری مانند سولو لولینگ و وان پیس و بلیچ ببر نذار مهارت هایی مانند ریاتسو یاد بگیره همین چیز هایی که داره عالیه و ایسی رو نادیده نگیر اگرچه یکم بده ولی پسر خوبیه

Well I ain't got much to say other than I love this fic and wanted to ask if you had extra chapters on a patreon or something

why you still uploading stories bruh, practice some more