I'm a God, Ok? (Naruto/God-SI)

Hey guys, BaleronBriter here, this story is the best in the world. Seriously though, this isn't the first thing I've ever written, but it is the first I have shared with anyone, so please be nice. I wanted to do something a bit more original than the usual, Guy with a System or Guy but he has a cool bloodline, so here's Guy but he's actually a God.

A nice change for naruto fanfic. Usually it's just the rinse and repeat of getting the best kekke genkai and ending up becoming a six path or kaguya level figure. But this one is much different, exploring the mythos that were rare and sparsely explained in the story. It's has a stable update and good writing quality. A good one to read if you like naruto and a god system mixed together.

writing quality - 5. there really isn't anything I can say to fault the writing, there isn't any mistakes that I can remember and if there are then they're obviously so small that I didn't notice them. updates - 5. i mean 2 days and 9 chapters seems good to me. story - 5. it's definitely good, considering the whole theme, it fits. it has lotm elements, for example, the mc's title being "The Watcher Behind The Stars" which is like a great old ones type of title. the pace of the story isn't bad, it starts just before naruto would arrive at wave (though naruto still isn't there. not like that's bad) character design - 5. the mc's thought process is good, at least from what I can tell. the mc has a cool form too (3 eyes and he's basically made of stars). his tone/way of speaking in his god form is pretty cool, overall great actor lol. world background - 5. I'm marking it as 5 since there isn't anything wrong with it. its naruto and its accurate so far... so yeah, good. at this point its 5 stars. oh yeah, there's only 9 chapters out and i've read them all already, thought i'd mention that.

There is a large potential for a amazing story

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i might be baize but this is by far one of the best books i have read to date if you just read you can feel the emotions in this story and it is amazing

Holy sh*t this is good. Great read even with only 4 chapters. Can’t wait for more

The story is interesting, although it is not the first fanfic in which the protagonist becomes a God, in fact, it is the best I have read related to that. I don't have many complaints about the writing or grammatical errors. In general, the story is good, it has no errors that are fatal, and if there are any, they are mostly minor, which in turn give a special touch to the Fanfic. 5/5

Love the story. Always love the god-Mc divine power/faith system.

This story is so good!!!🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

Very good work and also the writing style, to be honest this is the best work on Naruto in recent times!!! If this is the first work, then the author has talent.

deleted my previous review because i am obsessed with this story, its so good and is actually doing original things instead of just following the naruto story 5 stars on everything

Dude, your story looks like it's going to be more talk than action, and I don't like stories where there's only talk, I like action more, but your story looks like it's going to be good, but it's not for me, I don't like stories where the protagonist only talks or tries to negotiate instead of fighting

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