I'm a God, Ok? (Naruto/God-SI)

Hey guys, BaleronBriter here, this story is the best in the world. Seriously though, this isn't the first thing I've ever written, but it is the first I have shared with anyone, so please be nice. I wanted to do something a bit more original than the usual, Guy with a System or Guy but he has a cool bloodline, so here's Guy but he's actually a God.

A nice change for naruto fanfic. Usually it's just the rinse and repeat of getting the best kekke genkai and ending up becoming a six path or kaguya level figure. But this one is much different, exploring the mythos that were rare and sparsely explained in the story. It's has a stable update and good writing quality. A good one to read if you like naruto and a god system mixed together.

writing quality - 5. there really isn't anything I can say to fault the writing, there isn't any mistakes that I can remember and if there are then they're obviously so small that I didn't notice them. updates - 5. i mean 2 days and 9 chapters seems good to me. story - 5. it's definitely good, considering the whole theme, it fits. it has lotm elements, for example, the mc's title being "The Watcher Behind The Stars" which is like a great old ones type of title. the pace of the story isn't bad, it starts just before naruto would arrive at wave (though naruto still isn't there. not like that's bad) character design - 5. the mc's thought process is good, at least from what I can tell. the mc has a cool form too (3 eyes and he's basically made of stars). his tone/way of speaking in his god form is pretty cool, overall great actor lol. world background - 5. I'm marking it as 5 since there isn't anything wrong with it. its naruto and its accurate so far... so yeah, good. at this point its 5 stars. oh yeah, there's only 9 chapters out and i've read them all already, thought i'd mention that.

Holy sh*t this is good. Great read even with only 4 chapters. Can’t wait for more

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I didn’t like i one bit. At first it was okay - god trying to gain believers and all. Then slowly it changed from being a god to building your own village. Then fearing shinobi and not understanding the justus. Damn he is a freaking god. If you made him a god, then at least make him act like one. The way i see it it is no different from any other transmigration when the mc being lowkey and frightnes every now and then. The concept of being a god doesn’t really hits home.

There is a large potential for a amazing story

i might be baize but this is by far one of the best books i have read to date if you just read you can feel the emotions in this story and it is amazing

The story is great. An original concept for a fanfic which alone justifies it, but also good execution so far with the flow of events being satisfying... It should be higher on the rankings list it's so much better than a lot of them. Join the watcher from beyond the stars cult by giving it a try.

Dude, your story looks like it's going to be more talk than action, and I don't like stories where there's only talk, I like action more, but your story looks like it's going to be good, but it's not for me, I don't like stories where the protagonist only talks or tries to negotiate instead of fighting

This is honestly an amazing Fanfic. Coming into this, I expected an OP, godlike MC from the start - and was a tiny bit disappointed at first. But after the first couple chapters? Not at all. This is one of the best Naruto fanfics I've ever seen and I love the concept. I'm honestly impressed at the writing skill displayed by the author - I feel this would work just as well in an original novel as it does as a fanfic, which is rare as the majority of fanfic writers just piggyback off of the series, but this develops in a unique direction and does its own thing. It has some interaction with the main characters of Naruto, but it isn't to the point of pushing away the 'less important' ones for those with more screen time. There are multiple OCs given a realistic backstory that makes the readers sympathise with them, like how a Manga like One Piece might do - without going into too much or too little detail at times, and people are always given a satisfying conclusion. It isn't a pure wish-fulfilment Fanfic - those under the MC die, but as a God, he doesn't just treat it as nothing, nor is something made up to revive them as if nothing happened, yet they are still given a happy ending. Like a commenter I forget the name of said, neither the MC (or Author) make up excuses, he acts as a God should. As well as like how a previously normal human would. The Author builds on things mentioned, but either disregarded or not fully explored in Naruto (like with *SPOILERS****Jashin-Sama****SPOILERS*. It is done so in a skilled manner that makes sense to the point that it blurs the line between whether or not some of this was canon (as in I have to look it up at times, just to check what did or didn't actually happen in the show). I really look forward to more of this, and definitely recommend giving it a read - it will be well-worth the time.

The story is interesting, although it is not the first fanfic in which the protagonist becomes a God, in fact, it is the best I have read related to that. I don't have many complaints about the writing or grammatical errors. In general, the story is good, it has no errors that are fatal, and if there are any, they are mostly minor, which in turn give a special touch to the Fanfic. 5/5

Love the story. Always love the god-Mc divine power/faith system.

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