Naruto: Dual System Power At The Beginning

Mandatory 5 ⭐ to my own work. Ask any question you have below 👇🏻

Nice i just start reading it and i like this fun fiction You menation mc aim to ge tsunade and Kaguya I would like to see Semui also in mc harem

I ain't gonna lie, it ain't for me. The translation is good, but I haven't read far. I liked the system, but... the whole having to birth children for loot boxes is a big no for me. And based on the chapter titles, I'm not a huge fan of the direction I think it's going, but I appreciate the translator's efforts, so good luck.

What's the point of writing a novel about Naruto if the Author didn't even bother to read the original work to fit his own novel to the correct timeline? If in 12 chapters there are already inconsistencies then what to expect from the whole novel?

An entertaining fanfic, even though the plot is somewhat brainless and forced, with timeline mistakes, basically, the author doesn't understand the world very well so many things are nonsensical. The systems are annoying but limited in scope, so they don't reach the point of destroying the fanfic with bs random stuff. A decent fanfic to read with your IQ offline.

interesting i like that mc use the 8 gate as his main combat power.

Well, let see what happens next on the story and then if fanfic is great then I'll give 5 star rating. 😀😀

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will this show his children's progress? Or not? Just asking.