Naruto: Dual System Power At The Beginning

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I admit that it is bad in writing novels, in terms of character development why does the main character have a nature like a Chinese novel who always hates people who commit crimes in the future

Nice i just start reading it and i like this fun fiction You menation mc aim to ge tsunade and Kaguya I would like to see Semui also in mc harem

Typical chinese novel. People randomly loosing their mind over women and attacking others, thinking they can make the woman accept their proposal despite their rejection if they beat the police guy who is stopping him from forcing the woman. Very poorly done. Although translation is ok.

An entertaining fanfic, even though the plot is somewhat brainless and forced, with timeline mistakes, basically, the author doesn't understand the world very well so many things are nonsensical. The systems are annoying but limited in scope, so they don't reach the point of destroying the fanfic with bs random stuff. A decent fanfic to read with your IQ offline.

interesting i like that mc use the 8 gate as his main combat power.

I enjoy this story and hope the author avoids adding Yuri to the main character's harem. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Well, let see what happens next on the story and then if fanfic is great then I'll give 5 star rating. 😀😀

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