Percy Jackson - Beyond the Gods

I dont get why this fic has such a high rating, its just a word for word retelling of the original books with just a few mentions of mc thrown in every other sentence. It follows every other trope pjo fics has, murdered dead mother, op powers but not even using it. Dialogue also feels stiff and artificial at times although no grammar or spelling mistakes ive seen.

The story is one of the better Percy Jackson fanfics. However, I don't like how there isn't any growth with other characters. Having the mc doing all the fighting gets old real quick.

Keep up the good work. I love it not many Percy Jackson fanfiction and I hope you continue!!!

Author here, I'm posting this book on Wattpad too, my language is not English, I'm Brazilian. I hope you like it, vote and comment, please. Don't forget that!

An incredible experience! This story kept me hooked from beginning to end. The plot is engaging, the characters are memorable, and the writing is simply impeccable. The author managed to create a rich and detailed world, making me feel like I was experiencing every moment with the characters. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for an exciting and unforgettable read. Highlights: * Plot: Original and addictive. * Characters: Complex and well-developed. * Style: Fluid and engaging. * World: Rich and well-constructed.

Although it has some mistakes and is a so-so translation, this story is very good! There is a feeling in the characters that makes us feel immersive. I loved it!

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This story is pretty interesting and the main character is cool. But I just don’t like how much stronger he is than everyone else. By chapter 25 the author says that he destroy the gods with a slap of his hand. That just really gets rid of any intrigue and tension with the story as you know that the MC is just so far above it all. I just wish that the mic developed slower. A good example of power progression in the Percy Jackson universe would be the Prince of the Underworld story by shadowmonarch he also has a character stronger than the others in the story but it feels believable and his goal makes it fine.

author can you please add overpowered mc tag as i tend to avoid story like that

Não cheguei ler ainda, então depois volto para dar uma avaliação, mais quem será o par romântico? 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃

Very good, the best Percy Jackson story I've ever read! Despite having some mistakes and some problems, if you ignore them, it's a very immersive and exciting story, the author knew how to describe the characters' emotions very well. But some readers may find this a bit bad because they want something perfect in their retarded conception!

overall great quality, love it just hope power scaling is clear in the future cuz it seems like its heading to a cultivation powers stuff so yeah

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The story progresses really good. Not too slow neither too fast. It's really well written except for writing how beautiful he is like every chapter😂. But anyway that's all I can think of I don't like. It's also getting uploaded very often. The plot Twist at the end of vol. 1 was also really great, although a bit sad. Please keep up the great work