Harry Potter: The Rise Of Malfoy

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The novel is shit, it seems more like a summary because there are hardly any dialogues, everything is a summary of what the protagonist does. Second, the protagonist is stupid, he says he's not going to change the plot but constantly interferes, just as he says he doesn't like being the center of attention but constantly stands out too, the stupid guy contradicts himself. Furthermore, not wanting to change the plot is cowardly, especially because he is not weak and he does not lack talent either.

I am chapter 5 and it is a great story so far, MC is acting how you would expect from someone of his background and calmly preparing for what is to come without being arrogant. He takes advantage of his family's wealth of knowledge and absorbs it to the limit, trains himself for combat physically as well. Hope to continue reading a good story.

this is an ongoing story, raw: 霍格沃兹之马尔福崛起 we start with draco's lil bro, who wants to improve the magic world while saving his family. by year 2 the story leaves original plot, by year 4 the author is pulling out a game of thrones style scheming (all within existing harry potter verse, for eg herpo, morgan le fay etc) i read the mtl to chapter 400, its going great. give it a try

Trop de détails ajouter sans vrai intérêt et d'après l'auteur ils viennent de l'histoire originale hum il a l'air de mieux connaître hary potter que j.k Rowling LOL

Basic generic hp fanfic. Adult in child body acting like a child but seems calm because you know. Boosted memory because why not. Learning every spell known to the wizards in 1st year because he can. Joining the professor McGonagall's transfiguration and professor Flitwick's charms class because he's built different. Making girls blush and pay attention because he is 🗿 you know the rest. Now, I just hate the fact that besides some irrelevant changes like Harry not making it to quidditch but that doesn't affect the original story in any way because Harry can just join in the 2nd year. You can notice that our MC changes many things but it doesn't have any effect on the main storyline like it's a one-route game and whichever choice you choose will have the same outcome. Many times the pacing is shortened without any dialogue because the author can't be bothered to come up with a proper excuse of why something happened. Overall if you want to read something basic which you can find anywhere read this. This isn't a "gem" this is just a "somewhat cool shaped rock but dirty" meaning although it has potential the author lacks any originality. I am just reading this because it looked similar to "Harry Potter and the Prince Of Slytherin" where the MC reincarnated as Draco. Unfortunate that it was discontinued. I'm also curious to see what the development of romance will be like. *I'm a sucker for harem*

Frankly, this is the most entertaining harry potter fanfic I've read since “Lord Voldemort SI”, it's a fanfic that takes itself and the wizarding world seriously. Can't wait to see how the MC will strengthen his family and if more serious changes to the Canon will take place soon. I recommend this novel without any hesitations.

Great story with long chapters and frequent updates. MC is a strong and cunning person but not cruel either, this doesn’t fall into the pitfalls of Chinese fanfics either, all the characters are well thought out.

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just don't stop updating..................

I like the story. It's intriguing but still follows the typical MC is destined to gain strength. Which is fine but I would rather see some indulgence in his power and evil side when he is already destined to win.

The writing is too Chinese and makes you brain dead

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