Telos Karma Meta Gacha
Author: chocolatechipsrule
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Suko Hajime awakens a subspecies of Telos Karma and knowledge of worlds beyond his own.
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It's a pretty good story so far, but it has many plot holes and raises a lot of questions. For example, how does the assimilation system work? The main character assimilates Laxus Dreyar's abilities, yet Laxus is someone who can go toe-to-toe with at least a minor or full god atkeast in the 100 Year Quest. He even upgraded his own dragon slaying magic to Dragon King slaying magic in earlier arcs of fairy tail, and he has a powerful body similar to that of a dragon. He should be able to handle minor or full gods easily, but the author seems to have nerfed him for the sake of the story, which is quite frustrating. Additionally, the main character's personality is inconsistent; one moment he acts like a child, and the next, he's mature and serious. His personality shifts back and forth between being childish and mature all the time, which can be annoying to read. otherwise the story seems pretty good , It seems like this author may have made a mistake when choosing Laxus's powers, as it feels like he doesn't have a solid grasp of the Fairy Tail universe. That's just my opinion, though. Additionally, it seems like he doesn't have clear rules for how his "system" works, particularly regarding how characters are assimilated and summoned. It feels more like he writes based on what seems right in the moment rather than following a consistent framework.
espero mantengas la calidad y si puedes los capítulos mas largos seria apreciado. gran trabajo (lo dice alguien sin talento para escribir) de los mejores comienzos en un fic de DXD y e leído artos
A book that captures the essence of mystery and tension, with characters so alive they seem to leap off the pages. Each scene is a dance of words, where the unexpected becomes the only constant. The narrative envelops like a veil, revealing secrets little by little, while keeping the reader on the edge of anticipation. It is more than a story – it is an experience, an invitation to dive into a world where every detail matters, every gesture has weight. As you turn the last page, you feel as if something has changed inside you, as if you had lived another life, even if only for a few moments. It is impossible not to feel the urge to pick up the pen (or the keyboard) and create something as memorable as CHATGPT