In the dawn of time, a family of ordinary sailors and fishermen unknowingly stumbles upon a fate that would forever alter their destiny. A goddess, angered by their alleged act of theft against her, cursed them to sail the seas eternally, plundering treasures and pillaging wealth. And they came to be known as the first pirates to ever exist. This curse, however, came with an unexpected twist; immortality.
For centuries, the family navigated the treacherous waters, exploiting their newfound gift, to amass power and riches. They became the stuff of legend, feared and revered by all who crossed their path. Their dreaded name, "The Damned Ones," struck terror into the hearts of both men and gods.
Years passed, and the goddess, seemingly capricious, lifted the curse, allowing the family to set foot on land once again. But this freedom came with a catch; their immortality remained, a double-edged sword that rendered them invincible and more formidable.
And as the ages went by, the family's exploits became the tales told in myths and legends, but they themselves, lived among the humans. They built civilizations, sowed chaos, and reveled in their unparalleled power. Even the powerful rulers and other immortal factions trembled at the mention of their name. They were an overpowered, unkillable set of monstrosities that wanted nothing more than to have fun.
After years of separation, the family reunites, only to discover that one of them had gone missing. But that was only just the beginning.
A new enemy had emerged from the darkness, one who had in his possession a mysterious and terrifying power, one capable of killing even the unkillable family.
The family, driven by a mix of concern and self-preservation, put aside their differences and join forces to vanquish the threat.
Allied once again as one, their unyielding resolve and unmatched power would be tested like never before, but one thing was certain– they would not go quietly into the night. They had lived for tens of centuries and have gotten unaccustomed to death. The battle for their existence had begun, and the fate of the world hung in the balance.
They fought against both old and new foes, in a world where the supernatural was nothing more than a fairy tale, living up to their mythical title as the... IMMORTALS
I have to say, this opening scene is incredibly good. The fight scene is truly crafted like a high-quality artpiece. And the author mentioned r18 or something, hehehe. The plot is interesting, char design is unique and likeable. Writing quality = best! This is going to be epic, 100% recommended!
I find the concept very interesting and am looking forward to unraveling the mysteries you are building. It is really interesting that it is set in earth with the mythology and magic coming to life. The first chapter started very strong, then quickly the pace slowed down with the introduction of many different characters. It is only four chapters so far, so I am sure more will happen down the line. There are some grammar mistakes, but only in capitalization from what I can tell. The story also shifts scenes often which was difficult to follow when it happens every chapter. Overall I enjoyed it. I look forward to more.
i really liked this storyline, especially because it's about immortality [img=recommend]
The novel is simply amazing, the writing style is very good, and the author makes the reader excited to start reading and know the journey of the first pirate from the beginning, the fight scene is also good and detailed, and the best thing is the mystery behind the story, who are the skeletons who attacked the blonde woman, what is the connection between her and that teacher, what started it, I haven't read much yet, but I have already been attracted to this novel, I advise you all to read it