Teacher by day, Farmer by passion

I want to start of with, Thank you all so much for giving this work a try. especially the early readers, I'm sorry the chapters were delayed for nearly a week. I'm shameless enough to still pose myself a 5 star review. Thanks for the supports, it really pushed me to continue writing on. and now, if you folks have any queries, you can ask me! [img=In your face][img=In your face]

Be a clown and drop this one too. come on. don't be shy .

honestly it's shit writing but I'll read for now

It's really an amazing and well written book i really like it and I recommend reading it. It's worth reading.... and you did an amazing job 👏🏻 for writing this masterpiece 😁 clown

I never give reviews but somehow my dear friend here kidnapped me to read and I say it was fun, there is a little bit up and down here and there but it’s an amazing read to pass time, give it a try guys you won’t be disappointed^^ Let’s see how the author adds suspense and keep us on our hooks in latest chs.

Honestly the description is pretty accurate, the writing, plot and characters are chaotic.

Just a small suggestion you are leaving chapters without finishing it the princess request second chapter ends before he tells his decision and the alchemy deal also ends before they discussed the deal. It seems like an incomplete ending.

Olha a história começou muito boa mas a partir do capítulo 30 só cai a qualidade e começa a ficar estranho o desenvolvimento do personagem.

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Sorry for my English, but I love reading so much that even a translator doesn't bother me. A good start, indeed. The rejection by his beloved sounds mundane and somehow familiar. The transition also took place without a hitch. In short, it's great. The text is simple, unobtrusive, and easy to read. However, further on, something strange happens with the protagonist's personality. So, a sixteen-year-old teenager was placed in an adult body, given the memories of that body, and then, after completing the task, given 100 years of Wisdom. First, is the protagonist really okay after that? (Because I don't see the behaviour of a 16-year-old teenager who is ready to take responsibility for two children!!!) Secondly, why is there a transmigrant from another world if the protagonist does not use knowledge from Earth? (Give the system to some random dude and you won't notice any changes, at least for 60 chapters). Now about the protagonist's behaviour. He is offered a mountain in another place, and the protagonist agrees. Why? What's the point? I also don't understand why the girl's mother wasn't taken with them. The protagonist had no money problems, the mountain wasn't special. And he could have used someone to do the laundry, cleaning, and cooking, but for no logical reason, the mother was left in the village. The system is just a separate kind of ill-conceived. So, the protagonist doesn't even have to get his hands dirty, just like in a game, he taps the right place and gets a harvest. No need to water the crops, weed, destroy pests, or even plant physically. No effort is required, and the hero doesn't even need to click, because he has a bot... It is also unclear why the farming system allows the protagonist to take on apprentices. The author simply wanted it, and it happened. The children are also very convenient. The protagonist doesn't actually teach them anything, he just feeds them and they instantly become incredibly, unrealistically strong and talented cultivators who even invent their own techniques... Then a second voice appears in the protagonist's head. (I don't know, maybe I missed a chapter where this feature is explained or something? The protagonist begins to forget basic facts about himself (in the chapter, he is called Ace, but he assures himself that he didn't tell anyone (but I remember that when he met the students of the Flying Sword sect, he introduced himself as Ace). Well, I hope this is some kind of psychological manipulation that the hero will expose in the future, but I find it hard to believe, because the system warns the hero when he is in danger... This story is interesting because it is not typical; there are children in it, and that's cute. I think that's the secret to its high rating.

This was good story till the volume 1, from the Volume 2, it was so much meshed up, what happened here and there, I don't know, it was totally meshed up. One time Lily is good, another time She fallen in bed, possessed by ghost. When happen, didn't know. the Xie Linger something. he was with Mc, then when disappeared, her brother mother, when Happened don't know.

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Absolute banger of a novel. The story is hooking, The writing is satisfying and the charachter interactions feels so real. Must read

Ace becomes adult? That's interesting. It's out of the box, different with I've read so far. I will listen it more every time I'm free, hmm curious.