Ghoul: Starting with Sharingan

Alright, everyone, I'm uploading the fanfic again. I believe it might get taken down later, so I recommend following it on ScribbleHub instead. Thank you for your support!

A lot of mistakes with lantern(minami). She use bikaku not rinkaku. She didn't love arima she want to manipulate him. There is no love between them so what do you mean by "bring them together" or "the story between Minami and Arima is tragic one". Lantern is a psycho who is jealous of human. She is a serial killer that need to be put down. There is no justice in fixing her. It just force shipping them when there is no chemistry between them. This story's mc is a extreme good guys types. Extreme opposite of edgelord mc that want everything to be good. Feel like mc will save a pdf grapist if he had a chance. He saved a serial killer. It is like saying Jeffery Dahmer has a bad childhood and he should be forgiven type shat.

Peak, webnovel is going downhill these days......Peak, webnovel is going downhill these days......Peak, webnovel is going downhill these days......Peak, webnovel is going downhill these days......Peak, webnovel is going downhill these days......Peak, webnovel is going downhill these days......Peak, webnovel is going downhill these days......Peak, webnovel is going downhill these days......

Bad translation, I hope someone picks it up, someone more experienced.... (check my profile, this ff's fans...)

The spelling and grammar mistakes were extremely frustrating and made reading a real challenge. some basic proofreading would have made a huge difference. It’s hard to get immersed in a story when it’s filled with errors and awkward sentence structures. If you’re going to share your work with others, it’s best to give it some proper attention first. they need refinement. The story needs better planning and more careful editing. Perhaps if the T/N worked with an editor or a beta reader, the experience would be different. As it stands now? It was difficult to get through, and more frustrating than anything else.

There’s the grammar and spelling. Look, I get that not everyone is perfect, but basic proofreading exists. It’s hard to take a story seriously when it's littered with typos and weird sentence structures. If you’re going to put your work out there, at least run it through a spellcheck first. That being said, I do think the author has some potential. The ideas are there, but they need to slow down, plan things out better, and maybe get a beta reader to help clean things up. Right now, though? This was a struggle to get through utterly disgusting!! or just don't continue

So far I'm completely hooked, I'm glad for the authors update schedule as well.

I stumbled upon those novel completely by mistake. I like the concept of the story, the consistent improvement by the author, and the MC. This novel is AU (Alternative Universe) which means there are a handful of skills, personalities, and circumstance that don't and won't align with the canon of either Naruto or Tokyo Ghoul.

It's alright but it could be better. Some missed opportunities here and there as well as some less than likeable ideas. Overall it's alright if you want something casual to read or just bored.

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