Ghoul: Starting with Sharingan

Alright, everyone, I'm uploading the fanfic again. I believe it might get taken down later, so I recommend following it on ScribbleHub instead. Thank you for your support!

A lot of mistakes with lantern(minami). She use bikaku not rinkaku. She didn't love arima she want to manipulate him. There is no love between them so what do you mean by "bring them together" or "the story between Minami and Arima is tragic one". Lantern is a psycho who is jealous of human. She is a serial killer that need to be put down. There is no justice in fixing her. It just force shipping them when there is no chemistry between them. This story's mc is a extreme good guys types. Extreme opposite of edgelord mc that want everything to be good. Feel like mc will save a pdf grapist if he had a chance. He saved a serial killer. It is like saying Jeffery Dahmer has a bad childhood and he should be forgiven type shat.

The spelling and grammar mistakes were extremely frustrating and made reading a real challenge. some basic proofreading would have made a huge difference. It’s hard to get immersed in a story when it’s filled with errors and awkward sentence structures. If you’re going to share your work with others, it’s best to give it some proper attention first. they need refinement. The story needs better planning and more careful editing. Perhaps if the T/N worked with an editor or a beta reader, the experience would be different. As it stands now? It was difficult to get through, and more frustrating than anything else.

There’s the grammar and spelling. Look, I get that not everyone is perfect, but basic proofreading exists. It’s hard to take a story seriously when it's littered with typos and weird sentence structures. If you’re going to put your work out there, at least run it through a spellcheck first. That being said, I do think the author has some potential. The ideas are there, but they need to slow down, plan things out better, and maybe get a beta reader to help clean things up. Right now, though? This was a struggle to get through utterly disgusting!! or just don't continue

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Pretty great, it has great undertones of a fix it fic and the protag while pretty op is not the kind to go blowing up every challenge. Most of the fun is derived from character interaction and the romance(not harem) of the mc with the female lead.

Bad translation, I hope someone picks it up, someone more experienced.... (check my profile, this ff's fans...)

I stumbled upon those novel completely by mistake. I like the concept of the story, the consistent improvement by the author, and the MC. This novel is AU (Alternative Universe) which means there are a handful of skills, personalities, and circumstance that don't and won't align with the canon of either Naruto or Tokyo Ghoul.

Didn't like what you did with Eto there. Made her annoying to read. Always clinging to MC and he being a simp for her

Eu realmente gosto dessa estória, pensei que tinha sido abandonada para a minha alegria a encontrei no scribblehub, continue com ela por favor.

Good story my only complaint is that the chapters are short and byakuya is to I don't know not real like I feel he could be more open with eto

It's alright but it could be better. Some missed opportunities here and there as well as some less than likeable ideas. Overall it's alright if you want something casual to read or just bored.

good translation///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

Probablemente no entiendas pero bueno, muchas gracias por traducir esta historia del chino al inglés, gracias a eso la traducción del Google es muy coherente y entendible a diferencia de traducirlo directamente del china a español, muchas gracias y espero algo impacientemente tu próxima actualización.