Naruto: The Beginning

I'm a new writer guys so plz go easy on me . I'm just checking whether I have a little bit of talent for writing or not😅😅😅. I wouldn't give you any hopes on its updating since I myself am not sure whether I would be able to complete the story or not. I'll try to update as frequently as possible but no promises as I'm a student and the months of jan, feb, march and April all are filled with exams for me 😞😞😞. But plz do support And yes I'm not here to follow naruto plot things will diverge almost 40% from the original So those of you who are here to read only for naruto then it's not for you .

This is pretty good. It feels like an actual story and not just a emotionless dialogue between characters so good job. You’re doing pretty well with being a new writer I enjoy this story a lot and I’m glad I found it. The only thing I have to complain about is the big gap between sentences other than that good job keep up with the good work.

the story is quite good," it doesn't feel emotionless like some other novels you have quite the talent to come up with such a good story, I just hope that you won't drop this book, it has a lot of potential," I just have one small request give the protagonist jogan it's quite rare to see a protagonist with a pair of jogan and if you don't know it's abilities you can go and search it on YouTube you can find a lot of information of it please considerate

very good..................................................................................................................................................................................................................