not my type, sry.
FYI: It was "Seduce Kaguya mission".
16 days ago
12
Celleborn
WRITE A SYNOPSIS PLEASE!!! It's not that hard, go to the synopsis and write what this story is about, here is a tip, just writing what is in the name of the fic isn't enought!
8 days ago
6
NightroPulse
[3.4 Stars] Grammar and word count per-chapter for the most part is great and while your fanfic is interesting despite the commonly disliked forced penalty quest style, it's becoming more and more of a repetitive clutter. Also, the whole 'think out loud' character trait with a nonchalant attitude about it is dumb for a reincarnator, especially in a world filled with paranoid shinobi.
The problem with these kind of system fics is that there's a lot of repetitive reacting to the same and ever increasing stats/skills, that your eventually gonna have a hard time keeping track of it all. The readers even less so, will bother with it, that it just ends up being a time-waster for both parties, and just takes a lot of time and word-count away from story progression overall. I even noticed new skills being added that probably should have been there earlier. It never ends.
As of chapter 29, I skipped a lot of the skill stuff, which was the majority of the chapter, along with worrying about far off events. At first, I found these system fics interesting, but that quickly died as I just don't feel like their done well compared to some isekai manga. Nor do I feel they are necessary in certain universes.
As time goes on, I grow less and less tolerant of reading a bunch of system clutter and skip more and more of it.
At least in this one, it doesn't completely feel like it's used as a crutch for story telling, if only because interactions with other characters is decent instead of it all being summarized. There is still some of that with some events being skimmed over though, and interactions could still be longer and a bit more in-depth.
The best kind of system fics are the ones with systems that are more out-of-the-way without too much build up of new skills being added, or just focuses on the ones given at the start. That also includes unique systems that stray away from the cliché. As the saying goes; 'less is more.'
11 days ago
5
Vey_Ambrosius
I've tried to force myself to keep reading, but this story isn't for me. The concept is interesting but I don't like how it develops. and how the story jumps around which makes me dizzy when I read it
6 days ago
4
Praise_TheSun
I feel like i read this somewhere but i dont now where 🤔🤔
7 days ago
4
darkwhite
it was quite an unique experience ,reading naruto in light hearted setting that is
.................. don t be discouraged by negative reviews..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
3 days ago
2
Survivalist_
I really like how you filled the plot holes of the original Naruto with out going all dark and edgy like most of the Naruto fanfics
For example just making Itatchi crazy or Danzo the greatest evil to walk the earth.
Yours just feel more human.
That said the entire dating sim system that he has going on is sometimes to much for me, I’m also not a huge harem fan, but I also have to admit that it makes for great comedic relief
Love the story and thanks for the massive amount of updates
not my type, sry. FYI: It was "Seduce Kaguya mission".
WRITE A SYNOPSIS PLEASE!!! It's not that hard, go to the synopsis and write what this story is about, here is a tip, just writing what is in the name of the fic isn't enought!
[3.4 Stars] Grammar and word count per-chapter for the most part is great and while your fanfic is interesting despite the commonly disliked forced penalty quest style, it's becoming more and more of a repetitive clutter. Also, the whole 'think out loud' character trait with a nonchalant attitude about it is dumb for a reincarnator, especially in a world filled with paranoid shinobi. The problem with these kind of system fics is that there's a lot of repetitive reacting to the same and ever increasing stats/skills, that your eventually gonna have a hard time keeping track of it all. The readers even less so, will bother with it, that it just ends up being a time-waster for both parties, and just takes a lot of time and word-count away from story progression overall. I even noticed new skills being added that probably should have been there earlier. It never ends. As of chapter 29, I skipped a lot of the skill stuff, which was the majority of the chapter, along with worrying about far off events. At first, I found these system fics interesting, but that quickly died as I just don't feel like their done well compared to some isekai manga. Nor do I feel they are necessary in certain universes. As time goes on, I grow less and less tolerant of reading a bunch of system clutter and skip more and more of it. At least in this one, it doesn't completely feel like it's used as a crutch for story telling, if only because interactions with other characters is decent instead of it all being summarized. There is still some of that with some events being skimmed over though, and interactions could still be longer and a bit more in-depth. The best kind of system fics are the ones with systems that are more out-of-the-way without too much build up of new skills being added, or just focuses on the ones given at the start. That also includes unique systems that stray away from the cliché. As the saying goes; 'less is more.'
I've tried to force myself to keep reading, but this story isn't for me. The concept is interesting but I don't like how it develops. and how the story jumps around which makes me dizzy when I read it
I feel like i read this somewhere but i dont now where 🤔🤔
it was quite an unique experience ,reading naruto in light hearted setting that is .................. don t be discouraged by negative reviews..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I really like how you filled the plot holes of the original Naruto with out going all dark and edgy like most of the Naruto fanfics For example just making Itatchi crazy or Danzo the greatest evil to walk the earth. Yours just feel more human. That said the entire dating sim system that he has going on is sometimes to much for me, I’m also not a huge harem fan, but I also have to admit that it makes for great comedic relief Love the story and thanks for the massive amount of updates