After My Husband's First Love Died In An Avalanche

After My Husband's First Love Died In An Avalanche

Fantasy8 Chapters63.5K Views
Author: ManyWriters
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I was four months pregnant, but Granger's first love Scarlett shouted loudly and triggered an avalanche.

She just to let me witness that Granger chose to save her in the face of the avalanche.

"Call Granger quickly! You coward, dare not admit that Granger loves me more."

But I ignored her provocation.

I turned off my phone, wrapped myself tightly in my mountaineering clothes to keep warm, and waited for rescue silently.

Just because I knew that Granger would save me, and Scarlett would die.

On the day I gave birth, Granger buried me and the child under the iceberg for Scarlett, and froze to death.

"It's all your fault for triggering the avalanche! Otherwise, Scarlett would not have died at all. You and this child should pay the price for Scarlett's death!"

Granger's roar in the previous life is still ringing in my ears.

And I returned to the day of the avalanche.

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JezebelB
JezebelB

good read enjoyable and a great plot twist

2 months ago
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Sunniva_Wolf
Sunniva_Wolf

Good short story. Not much detail though. But overall, a plesant little novel!

2 months ago
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Gina_Marie_Pettitt_4861
Gina_Marie_Pettitt_4861

I found this story interesting though at times a bit confusing. The repeating paragraphs were obviously intended to indicate rebirth but before reaching the end they looked more like careless writing that just repeated paragraphs every 2-3 pages. This would probably work better as a longer story. Just a FYI short stories are normally 15-40 pages in western publishing. I’ve yet to see any more than 18 pages long on this site. I can find a higher word count in a page and a half ladies weekly magazine picked up at the grocery checkout.

9 days ago
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