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Author: Raizy_in
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hello, author here I'm kind of new to writing history, but I've had this project for a while So if you have any criticism that could help me develop, I would appreciate it. :D sorry for the review lol
I’m really enjoying the novel, the way you’ve built the VR world is really interesting. The Grim mark on Airum added a cool touch to the story and made me even more curious about what’s going to happen. The idea of having a game filled with so many mysteries, along with character development, is coming together really well! And most importantly, it’s not just about Airum, it’s also about how he’ll evolve with his friends and within the game. I’m excited to see what’s going to happen in the upcoming chapters! 😸