Rebirth in HxH World With Gardevoir

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Bro isn't that a pokemon? and what are you gonna do to a pokemon?

muy buen fanfic el desarrollo va bien y engancha uno de mis favoritos en los últimos tiempos te deseo lo mejor para que sigas adelante

as of latest chapter its actually really good btw is it translated and if so then plzz give raw

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It has a pretty decent premise and nen ability, although it's a little obnoxious in terms of overly used pokemon; but that's just personal preference. I'd say the major detractor and a huge mistake was the strength ranking system. This is a very lazy approach to HxH, classifying strength like this waters down characters to a huge degree and effectively makes it an AU fanfic. It goes directly again the "Show, don't tell" mentality; and it makes character strength and fights lackluster and boring.

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I read 50 chapters and I can say that this is a very good work. The emotions that it gave me are priceless, thanks to the author and translator for the time spent, I spent a week looking for something to read and could not calm my itch

story's not bed the line up pretty good the issue with it so far is the mc never really gets attacked just the pokemon even in the pokemon show the trainers get attacked every now and again by team rocket in such if you look passed that major plot hole it's a pretty decent read

translation is decent, fast release as well. I just don't like how author incorporate Pokemon here. His starter is Gardevoir instead of her base form Ralts. The power levels are your typical power rankings and didn't use HxH own system, everyone knows S-ranks aren't used in HxH. A rank is equivalent to the 5 calamities from Dark Continent. can't really see myself reading further when the simplest canon details from both worlds were broken in less than 10 chapters.

It was a great idea and had great potential, but the author is very lazy and shows this through his writing. What's the point of seeing a character with a boring personality achieving everything easily without any real effort?

Probaby the best hxh fanfiction i have read and one of the best fanfiction in general [img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries]