In a world where humanity teeters on the brink of extinction, enslaved by monstrous Beasts and their godlike Beastkin rulers, one man rises from the ashes of despair to challenge the very fabric of existence.
Rowan, born in the slums of a crumbling kingdom, is no ordinary man. His life, marked by tragedy, loss, and an unyielding thirst for vengeance. But as he ascends through the ranks of power, from a lowly soldier to a legendary warrior, Rowan discovers that his destiny is far greater than mere revenge.
Hey guys! This is the start of my first ever novel. I am exited to start this journey with you. If you have any critique or suggestions please write a review, so I can improve as an author. You can treat this comment as a Q&A.
Although It’s good, if you release a few more chapters, it might become interesting enough for a lot of people to read. There is one major problem with this: The POV’s, you said there from chapter 6th onward, that there would only be first person view, but the next two chapters are literally 3rd person again😂 But if you fix this and do all the chapters in first person, it’ll be great. I feel like the writting start’s to get a lot better at chapter 10, so keep reading till that. But it got potential, I’ll say that. Good read👍. Author just don’t fuck it up.
Seems decent enough. Drop a 100 chapters. Seriously keep it up brother, if this had a 100 chapters more I believe that it would be one of the better stories on this app.
Sounds interesting, keep it up brother.