Markus Tenebris was a man of science, a ruthless genius who dedicated his life to breaking the boundaries of reality. But when his final experiment collapsed in a catastrophic explosion, he expected death. Instead, he awoke in a new world.
Not just any world, a world of Hunters, Gates, and monsters.
A world on the brink of evolution.
Well, it's tradition to give yourself 5 stars. Anyway I've around 10 chapters of this, in written and ready. I'll see how the reactions are. Will appreciate reviews and comments. I'm absolutely merciless when commenting on other authors works, so I'm expecting the same. If you see something wrong, illogical or naive, please remind me of it. New chapters publishing will be dependent on my mood mostly, but you can expect 2 chapters weekly. Hope you'll enjoy and let me know if there are any issues. Cheers.
Great novel, I agree with the other guy about the check marks. But other then that the writing quality is great. A few writing mistakes here and there.
it's a really good novel. The only problem I have with it is the check mark, but all in all, it's a pretty good. Start
Nice; giving you a 4/5 because i seen better + the feeling that this is a bit rushed but overall good On the other hand, your fanfic/protag picture has his facial/beard hair being shown as black, if you made it white, it would probably go from a 65/100 to at least 75-80/100 and attract more readers
Over powered MC. Has no real goals, there is no real plot. No real motivation. He is given every power with no limit.. at some point you wonder what's the point of reading this.. I dropped it as soon as he turned into a horn dog. Tha author is clearly going through puberty.
good novel. I liked it. It may have its flaws and exaggerations, but it is better than other empty novels. ........................................
Such a nice small read ,Author wrote it very gracefully
Nothing to say aside from great story, thanks for everything
The fanfic proposal is very good. Without many grammatical errors, it is perfect to read. THE PROBLEM IS: Like the vast majority of system fanfictions, the prompts take up 80% of the story. It gets boring reading a chapter in which only four or five short paragraphs are the author's creation and the rest are crap about the system, descriptions and status.
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can you make more chapter please i think this is awesome version i seen
very good starting Love the way the story is progressing.
Loving the fanfic author keep going i am routing hope you continue with tha same pace and enthusiasm. ................................................
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I love the novel but I hope you that you can make some improvements in story development. Overall it's a good fanfic to read. Keep updating the novel little more frequently as I'm currently following it.