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A guy dies and is asked by the trouble maker ROB to choose one orb that will decide his fate, the guy in spite to the ROB takes two orbs, and after a series of cause effects he gets reincarnated into a solo leveling alternative reality three years before Sung Drip Woo gets his system.
Oh yeah, Adam has a better version of the Nano Machines.
What will he do? well, come to read!
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This is a rewrite of the original story, i decided to do it after revising the chapters and reading the comments of the readers.
This made me understand my mistakes and how i should have written this story.
How i should have used the nano machines as well how Adam should have behaved with his decisions.
So i decided to make a What If that is praticaly i trial to see if i understood the feedbacks and managed to raise the quality of the novel.
The first 4 chapters are identical from the original and it's from the 5th chapter where Adam takes the money for reporting the portal that things change.
But i suggest you all to reread the first 4 since you don't lose anything.
This time i will take a different way.
I owe you all this as an apology and a promise to write a good work.
Thank you for your patience.
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No Smut
No LGBT
No Simp.
No Harem
Yes: Moderate plot progression, slice of life, action, Sci-fi, high intelligence, realistic side characters, romance but realistic.
I only own my OC's and nothing else, any names, places, businesses are just used to write the fanfiction and nothing else, i take no ownership.
I only post here and Patreon, i do not allow no one to post this anywhere else, make audiobooks nor translate it.
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Monday to Friday update schedule.
I use AI to proof read, but i write this story myself, you've been advised.
No need to say more, those that have read my other stories know my skills, so read if you want.
i always liked ffs that explore the world of the original works then going with it plot. I just wish the characters are not plain cardboard boxes with no emotions or personality like 90% of novels/fanfic on this app. I felt like they need habits and likes and dislikes that make each of them different then the other then just a short dialogue with the mc and then they disappear I wish you luck
I read the previous book, if this is anything like that, this is great.. Also food for thoughts, can you imagine the amount of S-rank hunters countries like India and China would have with their population...
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Very reasonable fiction. There's not much bullshit that ruins the flow, the characters are solid and the pacing is good. Although some paragraphs give some AI vibes. Not that bad though. All in all... not perfect, but definitely good.
It's boring... Imo Don't get me wrong... It's good, but it doesn't really have a strong enough hook There are 2 points... 1. Adam's growth 2. Adam becoming Hunter aka plotline I don't care if he becomes Hunter in an year or 2 years or 3 year from now, but I want to see the guy growing(whether as a normie or a hunter).... But there is so much Hunter stuff in between his regular phase... I don't know whether to concentrate on the character or the plotline... Mixing the two is making story too much of a mishmash.... 1 sec I want him to be next tech tycoon billionaire and other second I want him to become a monarch Hope this helps Thanks
I dont leave alot of good reviews so this should be proof its pretty decent ........................................................................
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So far it's been a great read. I've not read much SL fanfics so i can't really compare it to others but the premise is really good and every chapter is interesting to read. Keep it up.
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story is great. no major problems for grammar. the MC id powerful but not super OP at the start. I am interested to see what happens 3 years before canon. the only problem this story has is that there are not enough chapters
This ff is great as if now, i hope you dont drop it author
Its diff n actually readable, my opinion valid asf