Tired of Naruto fanfics where the MC is from the modern world but failed to introduce even a modern pen. Talk about lost potential.
This isn't your typical overpowered reincarnation story. MC's journey is one of progressive power-ups, fuelled by his scientific brilliance and a relentless drive to improve the world around him. Forget instant god-like abilities; MC starts small, applying his medical knowledge to revolutionise local healthcare, then gradually introducing concepts like basic modern microbiology, scientific agriculture, and eventually, more complex technologies.
He's not just a ninja; he's a visionary, building an empire of innovation and change but also preparing for the war-torn period yet to come.
The writing quality and story of the first couple chapters are pretty good but like after chapter 6 it is pretty obvious that the fanfic is written or heavily influenced by AI a whole bunch of fancy words and information that has either no meaning or nothing to do with the story and plot it got so bad to the point where I had to skip multiple chapters and also a lot of character information inconsistencies like in one chapter the hokage learns about the MC and his experiments only for him to completely forget two chapters later to rehear about the experiments again and by the way that kind of situation happens multiple times throughout it gets really annoying. there are also a couple different things that I don't like about the fic but they're mostly just nitpicking and personal pet peeves. I mean generally speaking I don't mind a slow burner fanfic but if it's a slow burner fanfic with a whole bunch of extra words that is either made by AI or to just artificially bump up the word count which in my opinion is worse. it gets extremely frustrating and I'm trying to read past chapter 40 but I feel like everything in 40 chapters could have been put into 20
i will be honest i really appreciate people writing fanfic but please don't ruin it like if you think that you will not be able to write a fanfic in correct manner don't write now what did you write in this fanfic a small girl telling a small boy that "its like you are carrying a wisdom of lifetime" really bro what kid can say these things at such age and now the sentence "The reality of situation weigh heavily on him" how many did you use this sentence first in chapters where he was talking to mr.end and beginning and after he reincarnated its cring bro
5 stars for me. This story is amazing. The MC is cool. Well written. Keeps one engaged. I keep checking for updates. Look forward to the next chapters.
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