Orion Stark is not just a name, but a symbol of rebirth and a destiny that transcends boundaries. Forged at the intersection of intelligence, perseverance, and supernatural strength, this character will carve out his own unique place in the Marvel Universe.
His story will chronicle the destiny of a man with one of the greatest powers in the universe.
Artificial intelligence is overused, dialogues are repetitive and artificial. Jarvis sometimes speaks like a human and sometimes like an AI. Tony is not a genius, he speaks and acts like he has an IQ of 80. I repeat, dialogues are garbage. Not worth your time.
Story is Great 👍 .. I couldn't understand why it has not been recognized more...but Amazing work.. jean and wanda as love interest would be nice... otherwise it's an amazing read.. you keep doing what you do.
The story is very good, and the character interaction is also good. I just hope that you won't hesitate to change the plot and don't try to always follow the plot or force it. Change is a very good thing, will inform you when I see a plot hole. This story has very huge potential. Well done.
A Really wholesome read, it's worth, especially when you like a wholesome book
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It's good till now. Keep updating. This is a good work.
the book is amazing I hope that you keep updating it.i love the relationship between tony and Orion it's so cute 🥺
Novel is nice with interactions between character excellent but it will be good if some unnecesary lines are removed.If this is original novel then i hope you don't drop it and if it's translated then can you give raw name ?