Lookism: What If
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THIS IS AU
A Lookism fanfiction of a guy taking Daniel's body in an alternative reality.
This story takes place in an alternative universe of Lookism, i will write my own story, but i will take some arcs as inspiration but the way they will go can be like canon or differently, but Daniel butterflies will be shown.
Praticaly Lookism if it was written by me.
There will be multiple povs, just like the manhwa, as well slice of life, not everything will be about fights.
This story does not have harem, lgbt or any horny thing.
Romance will probably not even be there, so don't ask for it.
You can suggest plots or everything else but i do as i like at the end.
But don't tell me how i should write the characters personalities or their actions, this is not the same canon Lookism.
This story comes second on my priority list so the updates will be regular.
But this story quality will be probably the highest one from my stories, because for every chapter i will try to make coherent stats as well plot and significance.
The story will be Free, but on Patreon i will post some exclusive content as well advanced chapters for the subs.
Also the Patreon members will have the possibility to suggest fights, plots, Oc's and abilities.
So if you want to be heard, go on Patreon and comment or message me privately.
Obviously i hope you donate too, as that will give me more motivation as well help me immensely.
No smut
No lgbt
No harem
I only own my OC's and nothing else, any names, places, businesses are just used to write the fanfiction and nothing else, i take no ownership.
I only post here and Patreon, i do not allow no one to post this anywhere else, make audiobooks nor translate it.
Visit my Patreon to support!
Patreon: Mr_Graythorn
patreon.com/Mr_Graythorn
Monday to Friday update schedule.
I use AI to proof read, but i write this story myself, you've been advised.
No need to say more, those that have read my other stories know my skills, so read if you want.
I have not seen any gramatical errors to date, the way the author writes is interesting and actually evokes atleast some thought into the way the characters or events will develop later down the line. In this particular fic, he's basing the characters on PTJ's Lookism, but this is obviously an AU, and we're already seeing how he would give his own spin on the characters. So that's a 5 on Writing Quality, Story Development, and Character Design, just from what we have seen so far (as of Chapter 17), the updates are frequent (that's another 5 on the Stability of Updates), and the World Background is taken straight from Lookism, so I don't think that it's fair to rate it, as such I will also be giving it a five. I recommend it, it's fun and it gives that "Why would the author do this!?" (talking about PTJ in this case) relief. All in all, I have hope for this fic! PD: PTJ is a great artist, however, it is true that with the huge cast of side-characters and storylines that he's introduced in an effort of making Lookism more marketable (along with his increasingly better art... for the most part), the story's concept has kind of fallen apart, where originally the story was about... well lookism, and how appearances matter so much in our society today, the way of introducing this plot point (the second body) kept spiriling and spiraling... until it became a fighting manhwa, which I actually enjoy, but then it moved even further into what is now made fun of as "Gangism", and I stopped caring about anything other than the fights and the art, which is a shame, because we know from first-hand experience that PTJ can make a good story, but it seems that he now just farms hype to squeeze money, even going to the point of (allegedly) using AI to take care of the art. I have high hope for this fanfic, I'd like it to take everything that the fans love and build opon it, as well as around it. What I don't want it to do is tear it down and make another story with just the same characters and stick "Lookism" in the title for the sake of views, which so far, hasn't happened, thankfully. Mr_Graythorn also replies to feedback, and seems fun, and not the tradionally stuck-up "Christopher Nolan" type. Which is alway a plus!
It's good, I'm curious to see how Lookism would turn out if you wrote it, your power system is also fleshed out well. See you on the top of popularity of the Lookism fics. It won't take much.
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a story this author makes easy 5 star for me
i don't usually give reviews but this fic is good and the author too improved his writin quality Current review for 4 chapters. if you've read "his" previous fics, i am telling you that you're missing out by not reading this. Need for chapter. (English isn't my native language so forgive me I made any mistake writing this review.)
Author has a great writing style, and the story seems to be developing greatly. I’d recommend everyone to give it a try!!
This is one of the best lookism FF I've read. Expecting more chapters . And please don't drop this .🥺
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Story has been going well so far will need more chapters before I can give a real review.
u already know when one of my fav authors post I gotta be there. just caught up on the reality quest one and discovered this one can’t wait to see how this one goes and here’s the five stars time to dive in.
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A escrita do autor é excelente, tem um ótimo conhecimento sobre o que está escrevendo, a qualidade de escrita é ótima, sem erros, o desenvolvimento da história é dos personagens é de alta qualidade, a história está sendo escrita e atualizada de forma excelente, muito bom mesmo, espero que o autor não desista da história cedo e que continue atualizando, a personalidade do protagonista é muito boa e inteligente, e com o conhecimento da trama consegue utilizar todo potencial de Daniel Park e também evita a maioria dos erros do protagonista. (PORTUGUÊS)
About the romance, can't you add it to the story ? It's one of the things that PTJ neglects nowadays compared to other universe stories, especially when it comes to teenagers. I'm particularly in favor of DanielxCrystal because of the two bodies and that Jimyoung and Charles didn't like each other.
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ok i this is very interesting and please keep up the good work author