I'm only on chapter five because I'm early and that's how many chapter the author has out right now, but I want to say I cannot WAIT for another chapter, this was very good and I'm so glad author decided to post it, I can't wait to see how the MC grows, I dont want to spoil anything because Author doesn't have a synopsis, so i assume they want you to read and find our yourselves? idk. but so far? It's 100% worth reading. Try it out!
2 months ago
1
Fox_red
I read this while it had 14 Chapters.
The updates come 4 time a week, which is above average and consistent as far as I can tell.
Writing is a bit of a mixed bag. There are no grammatical errors and the events in the story make sense. We do spend a lot of time I the characters head but I do enjoy reading his thought process.
The character design is unique as far as I can tell, yes there have been many reincarnation stories with Draco as it's target but those don't have the same or similar background as this one.
To complete this review, I hope for more chapters in the future and don't forget to take a break.
9 days ago
0
grav1ty24
meh, its cool, like top 10%, but too edgy dude, that hippogriff scene and his reaction? meeeeeeh. + we're spending TOO much time in his head, its not okay bro. 8/10 its good, but it could be really better (like in best tier ff's)
I'm only on chapter five because I'm early and that's how many chapter the author has out right now, but I want to say I cannot WAIT for another chapter, this was very good and I'm so glad author decided to post it, I can't wait to see how the MC grows, I dont want to spoil anything because Author doesn't have a synopsis, so i assume they want you to read and find our yourselves? idk. but so far? It's 100% worth reading. Try it out!
I read this while it had 14 Chapters. The updates come 4 time a week, which is above average and consistent as far as I can tell. Writing is a bit of a mixed bag. There are no grammatical errors and the events in the story make sense. We do spend a lot of time I the characters head but I do enjoy reading his thought process. The character design is unique as far as I can tell, yes there have been many reincarnation stories with Draco as it's target but those don't have the same or similar background as this one. To complete this review, I hope for more chapters in the future and don't forget to take a break.
meh, its cool, like top 10%, but too edgy dude, that hippogriff scene and his reaction? meeeeeeh. + we're spending TOO much time in his head, its not okay bro. 8/10 its good, but it could be really better (like in best tier ff's)