An orphan who sell his only apartment his parents left for him before their end because of his relatives and third party involvement trying to snatched from him. Decided to put his last hope to invest in no pay to win game THE BEGINNING OF UNIVERSAL END. With unknown developers and world on it own. Not knowing it is a beginning of universal apocalypse, that is not just game a but preparation for the unknowing.
Let see what is in for him ...
The story has potential but the “fighting scenes” isn’t great as it should be more formatted and descriptive at least and the grammar needs improvement.
Please comment and review if there is anything I should correct or if you have any suggestions. Also, please share and recommend it for me.
I am dropping it and creating a new one. Named Void Tyrant