I was just a normal orphan… until I wasn’t.
One second, I was getting bullied in the countryside orphanage. The next, I fell off a cliff, got chased by a monster, accidentally stepped into a ruin portal, and awakened a system that forces me to evolve.
Sounds cool, right? Wrong.
Because apparently, my evolution comes with pain. A LOT of pain.
But hey, at least I got stronger. And poison-resistant. And possibly traumatized.
Now, I somehow ended up inside a academy’s ruin expedition, where everyone thinks I’m some lost amnesiac kid. (Which, for the record, was an accident. I just panicked.)
The novel was already great. The author really worked hard on creating this novel. The flow of the story was very natural.
ah this is soo fun. I wish the author would continue updating. it is light hearted and funny. there is room for improvement♡ very recommended.
This story promises a thrilling, fast-paced adventure with a mix of humor, struggle, and unexpected power growth. The protagonist's transformation from a bullied orphan to someone evolving through a system, albeit with excruciating pain, adds a fresh twist to the typical "lucky system user" trope. The tone is witty and self-aware, making it clear that while the protagonist gains power, they aren’t just cruising through life, they’re suffering for every bit of it. The accidental ruin portal entry and the misunderstanding at the academy suggest there will be plenty of chaotic moments, mistaken identities, and maybe even some reluctant friendships. Overall, this setup has strong potential for an engaging story that balances hardship with dark humor. If the execution matches the energy of the synopsis, it could be a highly entertaining read.
The synopsis is so hilarious, and of course, it was indeed a nice read. Darren, by the way, is such a handful. 😆
I've only read up to chapter 1, and I really hate Darren, ahahahah, but I'm curious about how the main character will develop, and considering he's handsome, will he get more handsome as time goes by?
Okay, the synopsis is hilarious 😂 your a funny author, comedy should be one of your hashtags. it's a fun read really I enjoy it and I hope others do too.
Already a decent read from just the prologue, I will support and keep reading!
I enjoyed your story writing. I started reading and ended up reading until the last chapter! I'm waiting for the next chapters. I like the MC's timely sense of humor and the weird system calling weak chicken! Good job, by the way!
love the flow of the story, and the context, but there is an improvement sometimes our words will become vague, overall it was good and i highly recommend for those readers