Beyond the Limit (DC)
Getting by in Gotham is hard enough, but for Joseph Bell, it's becoming impossible. Struggling with dead-end jobs and the weight of his mother's passing, he's desperate for a way out. A single reckless thought nearly pushes him into a life of crime—until a chance encounter forces him to reconsider. With newfound abilities, an AI companion in his head, and the lure of something greater just within reach, Joseph stands at a crossroads. But in a city ruled by heroes and villains, taking control of your own fate is easier said than done. One wrong move, and there’s no turning back.
The first 10 chapters are inspired by Less than Zero by Kenchi618 (Goated fanfic by the way). After that it will diverge more significantly.
No Harem.
Please comment, review, and give stones.
Am I cooking good, is this raw, or is this overcooked? Y'all let me know. I don't care bout power stones so don't bother wasting it on this fic. I can't make no promise on when new chapters come out. Might be a week a month or a year from now. Sorry in advance to those who fw my writing.
In my last review, I said I don't care about powerstones. I'm changin my mind. Stone me. And please also comment. You can criticize my writing or complain if what I wrote doesn't make sense. I'm trying to improve so anything helps. And also tell me if you are liking it. It motivates me. I'll release a few chapters every few days. I don't plan on doing a paywall either.
So far everything looks solid, and seems to be heading in the interesting direction. Although on the other hand I see some... similarities. My assessment so far is this, but it should be considered, considering the early stage of the story, more as an expression of my personal expectations
10/10 5/5 star's really liking it and going to keep reading it is my type of book the beginning was a little weird but the author is new so it is really good for his first fanfic i really like so far keep going.