Beyond the Limit (DC)
Getting by in Gotham is hard enough, but for Joseph Bell, it's becoming impossible. Struggling with dead-end jobs and the weight of his mother's passing, he's desperate for a way out. A single reckless thought nearly pushes him into a life of crime—until a chance encounter forces him to reconsider. With newfound abilities, an AI companion in his head, and the lure of something greater just within reach, Joseph stands at a crossroads. But in a city ruled by heroes and villains, taking control of your own fate is easier said than done. One wrong move, and there’s no turning back.
The first 10 chapters are inspired by Less than Zero by Kenchi618 (Goated fanfic by the way) and The Bloodsurge Edgerunner by DaoistMystery. After that it will diverge more significantly.
Based on Young Justice world and may borrow elements from other DC universes.
No Harem.
Please comment, review, and stone me.
In my last review, I said I don't care about powerstones. I'm changin my mind. Stone me. And please also comment. You can criticize my writing or complain if what I wrote doesn't make sense. I'm trying to improve so anything helps. And also tell me if you are liking it. It motivates me. I'll release a few chapters every few days. I don't plan on doing a paywall either.
Am I cooking good, is this raw, or is this overcooked? Y'all let me know. I don't care bout power stones so don't bother wasting it on this fic. I can't make no promise on when new chapters come out. Might be a week a month or a year from now. Sorry in advance to those who fw my writing.
Passed the GEN test - Good grammar - Entertaining - No harem
10/10 5/5 star's really liking it and going to keep reading it is my type of book the beginning was a little weird but the author is new so it is really good for his first fanfic i really like so far keep going.
So far everything looks solid, and seems to be heading in the interesting direction. Although on the other hand I see some... similarities. My assessment so far is this, but it should be considered, considering the early stage of the story, more as an expression of my personal expectations
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I like the book, the grammar is good, and so is the story. I hope the mc gets a power boost
I like it. The first few chapters copy from less than zero and blood surge edgerunner a bit but it heads to an interesting direction after. good job
Great story and catches the dc comics unpredictable nature and overall reads great story flow and character building. Great story keep it up!
the chef is at work cooking a gourmet meal
so far it's going good . hope it goes to the end
Ya he leído hasta el capítulo 37, y puedo decir que la calidad de la escritura es buena. Podría mejorar, pero es uno de los mejores que encontrarás. La trama es decente y no es demasiado repetitiva, solo en los primeros capítulos, pero eso cambia a medida que avanza la historia. Parece que no avanza mucho, como si se quedara atascado a veces, al menos para mí, pero eso no le quita su potencial para evolucionar hacia un trabajo tan bueno como Menos que cero. Es un verdadero diamante en bruto. ¡Muy buen trabajo!
I stopped at chapter 40+ and that's where I'll end it. The fic is good but not align to my interest. First, we have the mc going the heroic route while I was expecting him to go third party/ antihero route. Second, the A.I croaked. Third, the mc joined the league as a disciple or some shit and that broke the story for me. Overall, really good fic but taste is subjective.
10/10 it is an amazing story Definitely read it
writing Quality: this is an excellent read to be honest, it has a good development at the very least i would say. nothing is rushed. it follows its own flow and its a good thing. Story development: as I said before it follows the flow, the characters feel real, new characters are not introduced all at once, the story is well planned. Character design: 7/10 it's good. Update Stability: idk read it all in one sitting . World Background: it's dc everyone is chaotic.