Beyond the Limit (DC)
Getting by in Gotham is hard enough, but for Joseph Bell, it's becoming impossible. Struggling with dead-end jobs and the weight of his mother's passing, he's desperate for a way out. A single reckless thought nearly pushes him into a life of crime—until a chance encounter forces him to reconsider. With newfound abilities, an AI companion in his head, and the lure of something greater just within reach, Joseph stands at a crossroads. But in a world ruled by heroes and villains, taking control of your own fate is easier said than done. One wrong move, and there’s no turning back.
The first 10 chapters are inspired by Less than Zero by Kenchi618 (Goated fanfic by the way) and The Bloodsurge Edgerunner (now called System Override) by DaoistMystery. After that it will diverge more significantly.
Based on Young Justice world and may borrow elements from other DC universes.
I use A.I. as a tool to fix my grammar as English isn't my mother tongue. I do not use A.I. to write the story for me.
No Harem.
Plz comment, review, and stone me.
In my last review, I said I don't care about powerstones. I'm changin my mind. Stone me. And please also comment. You can criticize my writing or complain if what I wrote doesn't make sense. I'm trying to improve so anything helps. And also tell me if you are liking it. It motivates me. I'll release a few chapters every few days. I don't plan on doing a paywall either.
Passed the GEN test - Good grammar - Entertaining - No harem
I stopped at chapter 40+ and that's where I'll end it. The fic is good but not align to my interest. First, we have the mc going the heroic route while I was expecting him to go third party/ antihero route. Second, the A.I croaked. Third, the mc joined the league as a disciple or some shit and that broke the story for me. Overall, really good fic but taste is subjective.
Am I cooking good, is this raw, or is this overcooked? Y'all let me know. I don't care bout power stones so don't bother wasting it on this fic. I can't make no promise on when new chapters come out. Might be a week a month or a year from now. Sorry in advance to those who fw my writing.
10/10 5/5 star's really liking it and going to keep reading it is my type of book the beginning was a little weird but the author is new so it is really good for his first fanfic i really like so far keep going.
I just caught up, and I can honestly say that this is better then most DC fanfics I've read on this app. the grammer is good, the story remains entertaining, and the romance and character development is pretty solid.
So far everything looks solid, and seems to be heading in the interesting direction. Although on the other hand I see some... similarities. My assessment so far is this, but it should be considered, considering the early stage of the story, more as an expression of my personal expectations
I like the book, the grammar is good, and so is the story. I hope the mc gets a power boost
I like it. The first few chapters copy from less than zero and blood surge edgerunner a bit but it heads to an interesting direction after. good job
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Great story and catches the dc comics unpredictable nature and overall reads great story flow and character building. Great story keep it up!
Love the fic and it is well-written. Hope Nova comes back tho. Loved everything about it, keep the updates coming
Overall, it's one of my favorite DC stories. It starts off slow, but it does a great job establishing the characters' personalities and world-building. If you're patient, it builds up to an action-packed fightfest. The author isn't afraid to deviate from the plot while still following a somewhat familiar path. The protagonist has a significant impact a big one, in fact. I'm really enjoying it.
Good story the MC has emotions and isn't just a brick wall. It has good grammar as well................................................................................................................
Great story great writing isn’t like every other murder hobo or broken character troupe actual character building training and good pacing.