Naruto: My Hiddden Village

Yo guys, five stars auto-launched to auto-boost the story rating! Alright, no need to discuss my jokes here. You all better use this review section to give impactful critiques or suggestions for this story. Thanks also for being willing to read my weird story, yeah!

[A little chat Guys] Maybe some of you already know and feel it, yes, I will admit that I do use AI to optimize the chapters I make. There are several reasons why I do it: 1. I'm not that good at English, so every time I make a chapter that I write in my country's language, I will translate and optimize the chapter with the help of AI 2. When I wrote all these chapters, I wrote them using an old laptop whose screen only worked for about 5-6 hours. After that the screen would flicker which made me unable to see the results of my writing clearly. In order to make the screen return to normal, I have to rest my laptop with sleep mode for 5-6 hours, and it depends on luck whether after I do that the screen will return to normal after I turn my laptop back on. And I have to make at least 2-3 chapters a day in this condition. So I have no choice but to ask for help from AI and sometimes don't have time to edit the writing so that the results are not so good. So forgive the author if my writing is a bit disappointing to your expectations. After all my rants, I want to share my good news with all of you and thank all the readers who have faithfully supported me and even supported my Patreon. With your support on my Patreon, I finally have the money to buy a monitor even though it's a used one to make me write more comfortably. Thank you to those of you who have joined the Patreon community. I will also not forget to thank all of you who have faithfully read this work. Everyone I mentioned Lazy_sensei8, mikedanger, Just_Rez, Joshua_Lorenzo, SliverStorm8, Miguel_024, NOVELadict123, _Hori_, and everyone I can't mention all here. I hope that after I successfully buy a monitor, my writing will be better, hopefully. That's all, thank you for reading my long rant, from the author. Novalista

Cool concept ruined again by ai. Constantly writes summaries of what should be chapters and constantly repeating the same description of "venom" over and over. It's more filler than Naruto was with the word count.

I read all the available chapters and I will say that I really liked them. The main character has a cheat, but he does not own another stupid system. I hope the cheat will become the basis of his power, and also that the author will delve more into the details of jutsu and the chakra system in general, such as chakra control, chakra formation, changing the nature of chakra (Yin, Yang, Earth, Fire, Wind, Lightning, Water) and the creation of Kekkei Genkai and Kekkei Tota (not stealing them).

Although I've read all the available chapters, I feel this fanfic still has huge potential for growth! The 'VENOM' ninjutsu concept is so *interesting to explore further, and I'm optimistic this story will get even more exciting in future chapters! Keep up the great work, author!

Espero que foque bastante na contrução de reino e de preferência não misture outros animes.,.,,.,.,.,.,...,.,,.,.,..,.,,....,,,.,.,.,.,,,...,.,.,.,.,.,,,.,.,,.,,.,.,.,,,,.,,,.,,.,..,,..,.,,,,..,,

Hi author! I've marathoned up to chapter 11 and I'm not disappointed! Please, please don't let this novel go on hiatus! As a suggestion, it would be awesome if InoShikaCho joined the MC's new village. And FYI, I'm a hardcore #TeamSingleHeroine! Ganbatte author! ✨

And immediately a question and a complaint, in the first chapter it is stated that these are allied families with their own last names, so how is the new generation of the Takagami clan. It does not work like that, their children will carry their last name, even if they were vassals, the overlords are dead except for one, but excuse me, it looks like my friend married a girl, they had children and their children took my last name. Complete nonsense.

Hey Author! I'm totally digging your story idea for this one! Seriously creative! Totally awesome! Basically, it's maximally cool! Please, I'm begging you, don't stop writing midway! Continue it until the end! I'm already super hooked! 😎 Oh, and just FYI, I'm #TeamHarem hardcore, yeah! 💖 So, for you #TeamSingleHeroine, no hard feelings if we have different tastes! Just chill, the important thing is we all like the story, right? Agree? 👍 Peace! ✌️

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