The Accidental Mage: Awakening of the Ordinary
In a world where any normal human could create elements at will, Aziel Mateo came into life and was left in an orphanage.
Humans from this world were granted magic by the universe when they turned fifteen years old. These blessed magic users served under the twelve gods.
Aziel Mateo, a kid without visible talent found that he also couldn't do magic as he wasn't blessed by the universe.
He decided to train himself in order to fill the gap between magic users and himself. However, he still found himself lacking, as the magic users can become stronger with their magic.
Aziel Mateo later got admitted in the Academy but felt like an outsider, always being bullied, and rediculed constantly. Still, he continued his training in the shadows, slowly but surely he rose up to the ranks of the strong students without using magic.
When everything seem to finally going his way, he was ambushed during their training camp, and left there to be eaten by a beast.
However, this tragic event forever altered the course of his life in a positive way.
Aziel Mateo survived that ambush and was brought into a cave where he saw a woman, introducing him the magic chest that was full of magic scrolls. The scrolls that contained forgotten arcane knowledge for magic.
The woman revealed herself as a goddess who was betrayed. She helped Aziel become stronger for a cause. She needs his help in getting vangeance, in getting the justice that she deserves.
Aziel Mateo obtain the ancient arcane powers, and become stronger that he didn't thought he could attain, not even in his imaginations.
The chapters are a bit lengthy. I don't know if that is a positive feedback to your book but at least for me its good. However, I advice to shorten the chapters a bit. The readers might become bored in reading the story. I rated it 5 to boost your book, I hope that helps.[img=More pls]
This has lots of potential, its pretty flesh out but with a bit of minor issue, but the good thing is the author learn and fix this issues as chapter go by. 9/10 will standby and read again. Cant wait for more!!!
I really do like the novel just it is a bit lengthy, but there is room for improvement and the author also has great potential thank you author
its a good book with a solid storyline but the paragraph is too lengthy for my taste, though I usually write the same too but for readers it must be adjusted... besides that everything is good, i recommend it
All I can say is I love this book😍 starting from how the world is introduced, MC’s backstory and discrimination he’s experiencing and the lovely Sab🥹 officially one of my top books😌
absolutely mind-blowing and captivating novel, Author🔥
The author's writing is pure magic. This novel has it all, it's really interesting and I'm enjoying it. Keep it up author, you are amazing.
I see that the author corrects the first chapter and manage to make the story more appealing. Great work author, thank you and more power. I look forward to your book's progress.
The book was starting to get interesting as the story unfolds. The author managed to correct the mistakes from the past chapters and the writing is much more understandable than the previous chapters. Keep up the good work author!
The story is great for me. I wanna read some more of it, definitely coming back for more. There's still room for improvement but I really like the story. Thank you author.
Dear Author, I might suggest for you to tweak your 1st chapter a bit, cause it feels a bit fast paced for me. Though I haven't really finished it yet, the progression of the story is getting better as you publish more chapters. This is a good read and the author is also improving so it's good. (≧▽≦) Sincerely, Rieken
The book was generic and boring because of how long the chapters are. However, it gets more interesting as the story goes on. Hoping to read more about it.
The story building is very much impressive. Definitely following.
The chapter 1 was lengthy but I pushed through and now I’m hooked. Love the storyline
This is an awesome story! The writing is top-notch and the world-building is fantastic. The pacing is also great and the characters are well developed. I really got hooked with the story. Keep up the good work!