Set in the untamed, merciless realm of Velgaroth, where the whims of fortune dictate the fates of its denizens, Alarion is a boy caught between the crushing weight of a shattered family and the unforgiving, merciless world that lays beyond. In a brutal, lonely childhood with an abusive mother and a drunken, neglectful father, Alarion's existence is one of agony and never-articulated anticipation. Every day is a war for him, not only against the outside world but against the blood that flows through his veins.
overall this novel is good creative and many more and there is world build up that was good and intense and I think I will read more chapter I like how you wrote the story in the mc perspective that's all have a good journey through out the web novel God bless..
I really love your story! The way you’ve captured Alarion’s struggles in such a harsh, unforgiving world is incredible. His pain and resilience feel so real, and the world of Velgaroth is both captivating and intense. I’d give it a solid 4.5/5! Keep up the great work – I’m excited to see where you take this!
wow! what a build-up really like the dark lord and the family problem. the writing quality is superb, can't wait to read all the chapters
wow, I love the way you articulate what is going on with his family situation and Velgaroth is really intrigue kinda dark too lol, amazing job!
The first chapter was intense. The characters are fleshed out. It has great potential. Would like to see more of authors world and the mysterious women.
Interesting premise and the first chapter definitely hooked me. Expect this to be worth following!
Wait this is actually amazing😭 your cooking keep up the good work I cannot wait to see more 😅it’s really slow but I can deal with it many works that are good are pretty slow
This novel is really Good even its slow I can tell it’s a build up this also my 5th web novel and I’m glad I got to read this on my journey