Danmachi : Ashen Knight

great idea for a fanfic novel, especially the character development but u make it with AI, it became bland, monotone, and the lack of details....shame

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just try to read it bro or this guy wil hunt you one of the best danmachi fanfic so far.

litterly just saw the description and went for it haha

this is good i like it

Tolong dilanjutkan.. Ceritanya menarik.. Coba periksa terminologi fandom danmachi sebagai bahan referensi.. Jangan terlalu jauh dari sistem dunianya, tak perlu ada tambahan yang hanya merepotkan mu..

Love the story idea hopefully it keeps getting updates and actually has its own plot even when canon starts

I love it but I feel like something is wrong like it's an AI novel and I don't know why is the story slow but overall it's good the mc is same as the anime

..............................Read This.

The idea is fire, but the story is just so ASS. Literally no substance, nothing, the chapters just repeat the same thing over and over again god damn bruh

The story telling is set up great, the only issue being that the way it’s written is a little weird, the paragraph composition is kinda strange.

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okay jaime vraiment ce genre de fic danmachi et celle la est clairement bonne je la conseille , le mc est bien decrit et montre et soncaractere est toujours bon