Totsuki Genius
Author: Supreme_Dragon_God
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Damian Gray was just a young living her life with her friends in Naples.
One day, his adoptive father (who he calls his grandfather for some reason) simply does as Master Oogway did and tells him that his time has come.
But before that, he made Damian travel from Naples to Japan to study at the world-famous culinary academy, Totsuki.
What kind of situations await Damian in this new environment?
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The book isn’t bad from what I read so far. You just need to fix some grammar here and there. Also fix the synopsis because it was kind of confusing. You should also add Jojo and Shogukei no sama tags, so people know what kind of fanfiction it is. Overall like I said it’s good so far if you ignore the slight grammar hiccups then and there. But people should definitely give it a try. I gave this a 5 star so this story can get more traction.
It's an okay story, but it's very hard to understand. The translation is poorly done, which forces you to reread the sentences repeatedly to piece together what the author is trying to convey.
Is it a translation or are you writing it yourself?