Mash-Up: I'm Not A Substitute

Again, this is just a translation with some edits to make it easier to read. As far as I read it, this is quite an interesting fic for me and I do enjoy it quite a bit, hopefully you will enjoy it as well. Leave a comment/ review/ power stone if you do! or all three of it!

Very mediocre, like extremely, nothing s happening, dude just juggling girls and doing nothing, like wtf even happening words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words

Another system controlled MC... ... .. .

after chapter 50 the story become so boring. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. .. .. ... . . . .. . .. .

I initially don't want to criticize this because I enjoyed the other book, sadly it just doesn't sit with me to stay silent. The start was good, I was genuinely enjoying it, however it started to jump from one scene to another, never finishing the supposed scene. Also, his character doesn't have a specific life on it. I apologize for my words but it is what it is.

what is this kind of story development... mc seems like someone who doesn't have a clear and good life goal. he's just trying to be a substitute boyfriend for every heroine in this story?? really? and mc's nature is so easy to control like other beta mc2.. does it have to suck up like that to loyal heroine.. don't be offended author . i honestly admit this is a very good fanfic. and this is the first time i've found a storyline like this.. well as you know usually every fanfic will be very cliche with mc's dependence on the system, collecting harem like pokemon and mc who pretends to be the most hurt as if other people owe him money.... and for this time i'm interested in reading your work.. keep up the spirit author, hopefully future developments will be even better

This novel has an interesting premise, especially with the replacement love concept, which often appears in drama stories. Kitahara Takashi as the MC seems to have a hidden plan, particularly with the system he uses to "collect points" through interactions with heroines from various anime series. There’s a mystery element that makes readers curious about his true motives.

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I actually enjoy this fanfic alot but when the shinomiya girl(not Kaguya) appeared i just started despising this fanfic

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Las estrellas lo dicen todo, mi calificación es así. Esperé y esperé que la historia mejorara, que el MC deje de ser un mariquita cobarde y manipulador, que deje su hipocresía, que si quiere un harem lo deje claro de una vez por todas, que elija al menos una chica que no sea la OC del autor, pero solo salí decepcionado. Es un masoquista, pero también es un manipulador emocional, tiene una personalidad podrida, si me preguntaran tendría una personalidad similar a la princesa Renner de Overlord, es muy egoísta a nivel de monstruo, es un transmigrante pero parece que no ha aprendido nada de su anterior vida. Una pena, solo mi profesionalismo me impide darle una reseña de 0 estrellas, así que al final fui imparcial.

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Uma novel excelente para ler depois de ler tudo estava na estante, um personagem principal com personalidade e objetivos claros. Os capítulos são de tamanho médio mas tenho a sensação de que cada capítulo tem uma história completa como mini-arcos que descreve o ambiente e a situação. As personagens femininas são bem escolhidas e com as personalidades corretas.[img=update]