well,this story only for Indian, the truck Kun make the story more akin to a si fanfic,a lot of unnecessary dialogue with system
22 days ago
2
Raafi_Fadhila_Zaki
Keep up the good work my friend, I and other readers always support this work. Don't let this work stop in the middle of the story because that's not cool. But I will support this work every day and always pray for the best.
a month ago
2
Olethros_Mania
the grammar is good... plots interesting ... i am not sure about the pacing though... the story is just not for me... its's good though ...
a month ago
1
Sir90
The name doesn't fit this world at all. I don't like the system, they're useless without the system......................................
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well,this story only for Indian, the truck Kun make the story more akin to a si fanfic,a lot of unnecessary dialogue with system
Keep up the good work my friend, I and other readers always support this work. Don't let this work stop in the middle of the story because that's not cool. But I will support this work every day and always pray for the best.
the grammar is good... plots interesting ... i am not sure about the pacing though... the story is just not for me... its's good though ...
The name doesn't fit this world at all. I don't like the system, they're useless without the system...................................... ........................................................