this aint Guts, this is a random dude with his sword and looks but he doesnt act like him, the author makes shit up on the fly for him and the mc doesnt even have his skills, he has a proficiency system with all his skills level 1, the author gave him the ability to use all forms of bending from avatar for some stupid reason and now hes speaking about random shit like hes wulf the son of odin and hes the exiled prince of some made up and so yeah dont bother reading this is you came cos its was Guts in GoT
6 days ago
33
Cevahir_Gezer
nice concept but the book is just a bunch of stupid nonsense coming together. It's really bad, the plot is terrible, the writing is bad, the character design, story development, the world background are even worse.
3 days ago
17
Darktokio
La idea es buena pero mal ejecutada, el protagonista no tiene nada de gun, despues toda las historias de que es un star hijo de odin con poderes del avatar me parece una verdadera mierda.
Gun es un gerrero fuerte, muy fuerte pero no tan grande como para no poder montar a caballo has que se gane un nombre peleando con bandidos, salvaje o hijos del hierro cualquier cosa.
2 days ago
4
kiritonaruto
bro if you are going to marry him to someone make him marry someone like dacey mormont.
3 days ago
4
Gd_Sys
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
9 days ago
4
BryndenRivers
Really good so far!
8 days ago
3
Satans_Bastard
Punctuation errors abound.
Does the author think three dots are a full stop or what? Grammar doesn't work that way.
I won't even mention the plot.
this aint Guts, this is a random dude with his sword and looks but he doesnt act like him, the author makes shit up on the fly for him and the mc doesnt even have his skills, he has a proficiency system with all his skills level 1, the author gave him the ability to use all forms of bending from avatar for some stupid reason and now hes speaking about random shit like hes wulf the son of odin and hes the exiled prince of some made up and so yeah dont bother reading this is you came cos its was Guts in GoT
nice concept but the book is just a bunch of stupid nonsense coming together. It's really bad, the plot is terrible, the writing is bad, the character design, story development, the world background are even worse.
La idea es buena pero mal ejecutada, el protagonista no tiene nada de gun, despues toda las historias de que es un star hijo de odin con poderes del avatar me parece una verdadera mierda. Gun es un gerrero fuerte, muy fuerte pero no tan grande como para no poder montar a caballo has que se gane un nombre peleando con bandidos, salvaje o hijos del hierro cualquier cosa.
bro if you are going to marry him to someone make him marry someone like dacey mormont.
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Really good so far!
Punctuation errors abound. Does the author think three dots are a full stop or what? Grammar doesn't work that way. I won't even mention the plot.