Kael, a lone Gloomhound cursed by blood and fate, walks the thin line between hunter and hunted. Branded as a murderer, he stalks the corrupt under the cover of night, guided by visions of their sins. But as the council schemes to resurrect an ancient horror and a reluctant bond ties him to Winter—an heir tainted by human blood—Kael must uncover the truth before he becomes the very monster they fear.
In the darkness, the Reaper waits. But who will he claim next?
Your prologue is a strong, atmospheric opening that sets up the dark and mysterious world. It effectively builds intrigue with its eerie tone, compelling hook, and layered characters. The writing flows well, though some areas could benefit from slight refinements in pacing and clarity. A bit more worldbuilding detail would enhance immersion. Overall, it’s a gripping start with just a few tweaks away from being even more powerful.[img=recommend]