Naruto: The Yin System
Author: gg_gg_8546
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Story about a man who combined with kyubi's energy resulting in a weird system
Watch how that man comes into power and dominate the world
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This novel is really good, but you still have a lot of areas to improve. First, you should increase the word count of each chapter — even if it’s just by half its current size. Second, explain more about the Yin System and expand its abilities. At the same time, you can add unique powers for the protagonist, like using Yin and Yang energy to evolve his life level. Also, don’t fully merge him into the Naruto universe. For example, instead of giving him an Otsutsuki clan bloodline, create a unique bloodline just for him. Just make him truly stand out. You also need to help him grow stronger — right now, you should let him rise in power quickly. Third, we all know that wealthy people in Naruto are respected, so you should help him fully take ownership of Kaiza’s wealth. Fourth, read more novels — and I’m sure you know exactly the kind I’m talking about… hehehe 😏 Note: If you have any questions, feel free to ask me — I might be able to help too.