Lazarus, a man burdened by the dream of ending the pirate scourge, could only sigh. Ten long years he'd toiled, muscles aching, spirit yearning for progress.
Yet, his strength remained stubbornly ordinary, a cruel joke of a talentless existence. The dream felt like a distant shore he could never reach.
Five more years crawled by, each day a monotonous echo of the last. Lazarus, the marine's chore boy, the very bottom rung of their rigid hierarchy.
Humiliation was a constant companion, the weight of his insignificance pressing down on him. He was a shadow amongst heroes, a silent testament to unfulfilled aspirations.
Just when despair threatened to consume him entirely, a flicker of the impossible ignited within. He discovered it – a Life Simulation System.
The novel is good, with a good system. but the storyline keeps jumping up and down, suddenly it's on the right, suddenly it's on the left, there's very little interaction with other characters, and the story seems to have no soul. but the concept of the novel is good.
Good story, wierd writing style. Maybe it'll change going forward
Really good stuff! I've never read of a system that operates in the way this does, which made this an interesting read. I hope you can continue your excellent work!