Some of the characters and background feel confusing as we don't get a single thing to go off of. If you added a sentence or two descripting the area or a character looks my rating would defiantly go up. Other than that, I like the way the story is going. Keep writing.
Some of the characters and background feel confusing as we don't get a single thing to go off of. If you added a sentence or two descripting the area or a character looks my rating would defiantly go up. Other than that, I like the way the story is going. Keep writing.