Please try it out!
They said I was born broken.
White hair, hollow bones, a body better suited to a coffin than a blade. In a Empire where might rules and weakness dies young, I was nothing more than a mistake waiting to be buried.
When the solar eclipse devoured the sun, something inside me cracked. Not mercy. Not magic. Something older. Something monstrous. And as the shadows stretched across the land, so did my resolve.
I won’t beg to belong anymore. I’ll carve my place into the bones of the world, even if I have
to bleed for every inch.
Short chapters 800 words.
First novel please enjoy and help this novel.
Thanks!
Try it out its quite the fast read also an interesting plot[img=recommend]
I kind of like it its a first read the writing is quite good and it seems like everyday it’s a new chapter up
Nice writing ,fast read although the chapter length could be increasefd
Please try my book. Its a short chapter one with around 500 words per chapter fast read. Shameless author review. ------------------------------------
Its quite good I like that its not a braind3ad work and its a fast read with short chapter. But you could improve the chapters i guess.