In a world where strength is the only law, a five-year-old girl loses everything she had: her parents, her home, her legacy. Her family—genius inventors and Great Spiritual Masters—was wiped out in a single night. Without protectors, without power, without answers… But not without will.
Fu Huan chooses a path that forgives no weakness. There is no room for vanilla, no “friendship conquers evil,” no harems or romance. Only pure will, pain, blood, and slow, relentless growth.
This is not the story of the chosen one. This is the story of someone who, from nothing, transforms herself into something greater. In a world where only the strongest survive.
Fu Huan - The Beginning is a story where elements of Eastern mythology, intriguing characters, and epic battles intertwine. The protagonist, Fu Huan, is portrayed as a strong and mysterious figure, with whom it's impossible not to sympathize. The combat magic, based on manipulating space, adds uniqueness and tension to the plot. What I’ve managed to do is create an atmosphere in which characters gradually unfold, and their relationships become an important part of the narrative. My goal is not only to showcase adventures but also to delve into the characters’ inner struggles, as well as provide space for reflections on fate and spatial-temporal phenomena. However, despite the positive aspects, I understand that some parts could benefit from additional explanations or deeper descriptions. This is something I can improve in future chapters. Overall, I’m pleased with how the story is developing and hope that readers will enjoy Fu Huan's journey as much as I did when writing it.
I liked the beginning of the story, and I also appreciate that you didn’t push Tang San away. Lately, many people mock him, turning him into something close to a spawn of hell in their stories, while making their own characters look like messengers of justice. I don’t know if the story will follow the Shrek path, but I’ve been wanting to read a more balanced take for a while. And you mentioned that chapters will be released twice a day — is that your regular pace, or just until this version catches up with the one on your other platform?
I actually liked the pacing of the story — neither too fast nor too slow. The time skips are handled more subtly, and it’s nice to see how Fu grows as a person. Though it’s a bit strange that she’s still so cold, I guess that’s just the author’s style. The first 15 chapters do a good job of showing character development. But I’m a little picky, so I’m not giving it 5 stars, hehe.