Remove the Chinese name of the lamp ghost, clean up the grammar and change any Chinese elements in the story.
I'll change my rating to 5 when these critiques are taken care of.
This is a good story to translate and edit. Hope you consider my critique.
Remove the Chinese name of the lamp ghost, clean up the grammar and change any Chinese elements in the story. I'll change my rating to 5 when these critiques are taken care of. This is a good story to translate and edit. Hope you consider my critique.