Before you read:
*Please be aware that this is not a flower-and-bee, sunshine-and-rainbows kind of fanfic.
My MC is far from being the so-called hero. So if your heart is filled with justice, then maybe this isn’t for you.
Also, the story start very slowly. Unlike the Original Naruto story, I kick start the Journey from when MC was around 5 to 6 years old. Meaning most of the time, it would be lacking interaction or useless dialogues. The MC is an adults trap in a kid body, if you were to expect a random dialogues too early on you'll be in for a disappointment.
But as the story unfold, the meaningful conversation and other character personality will naturally be more balance as the story progress.*
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A modern soul from Earth awakens in the endless void. In that darkness, he becomes a soul devourer, consuming all that exists within the realm.
When nothing remains, he breaks through a portal and is reborn in the world of Naruto as Enso Uzumaki.
He’s no ordinary Shinobi.
Genjutsu? Useless—his soul is untouchable.
Ninjutsu? He wields all five elements with terrifying ease.
Taijutsu? Unrivalled in close combat.
Medical Ninjutsu? His skill outshines even Tsunade's.
Fuinjutsu? Taught by Kushina Uzumaki herself.
Enso isn’t here to relive the story—he’s here to surpass it. Calm, calculating, and utterly ruthless, he bends the Shinobi world to his will.
Is there anything he can’t do?
If it exists, he’ll master it. If it doesn’t, he’ll create it.
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I couldn’t present you with an Anos Voldigoad or Saitama-like character. Since the story is set in a Shinobi world, the MC can’t just throw skills around like a card game without depth. I’m modelling the MC after Rimuru Tempest, who is pretty OP from the start but still has room to grow.
What to expect?
1. Overpower Protagonist
2. Clear Goal and Ambition
3. Original Jutsu and Bloodline ability that fit well within the Narutoverse
4. Connecting the dots within the area that was left unexplored by the Original Canon.
5. No more than two love interests.
6. No loyalty toward the so-called 'Will Of Fire'
7. Logical fight scenes.
8. Clear Path of Development. ( Despite the MC being OP from the beginning, he's gonna keep growing stronger until he reaches the point of creating his unique Path.)
All I’m suggesting is to give it a try, and you might enjoy it.
Feel free to comment, or if you like the story, drop a review.
Best Naruto fanfic out there. The pacing between each chapter is spot on, please keep up the good work.
Fantastic start to a story with a lot of future potential. Highly recommend reading the first couple of chapters before judging the book
The story start off a bit slow, as the story start off from soul to infant than progress to kid. I initially thought that it would be very boring, but I am glad that I decided to stick around. The story keep getting better every 10 chapters, and the fight is logical enough and also in rule with Naruto World combat setting. The research done for this story are solid enough, that the extra ability can blended in without destroying the world structure. The MC is overpowered but not to the point where there is no path for development or progression. Overall, A Solid Naruto Fan-fic. Please keep up the good work.
Definitely one of the best Naruto Fics in this platform. You can expect fresh technique combinations coming from the Naruto Verse and Fate Series. The Author also explains most, if not all techniques that the MC is using thoroughly which really helps a lot even if you haven't watched the Fate Series yet like me. Overall 9.8/10 for me. I haven't felt bored when i binged upto the latest chapter i have read since like what i have said, this Fic feautures fresh technique combinations when compared to the Generic Naruto Fics found in this platform. Hopefully, you will continue to write and finish this Fic Author-san!
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if you make OP character then try to balance it what the point of making OP character😅😅😅
More and more enjoyable as it continues . Plus, where else would I see a team of Uzumaki, Uchiha, Hyuuga (hopefully not a spoiler…). Love the Summons the MC Uzumaki Enso gets as well.
It’s a really good book I like it please keep making more chapters of it
great story love to see the coming chapters and hope you don't give up on the story
This is one of the greatest Naruto fanfics I have read keep up the good work
This is a really good Naruto fan fiction
This is a good novel. Can’t find many naruto fanfics these day. This one is a good one.
I really like the progression of your story; not too slow, not too fast - just right. But what I really, really like is the Spider Summons, as they are most versatile of the animal groups and most suitable for Shinobi life and profession. 10/10 would and did recommend 👌🏻. It really became a bore if the MC has 3 Sanin Summoning Contracts or Dragon Contract. Dragons became so overused in fanfiction over the last couple of years - especially in Douluo Dalu fanfiction. All in all, you are doing awesome, please keep up the good work 👏🏻.
Great story and world building wager to see how the story progresses in the later chapters
Its great and actually well written compared to others this one has had serious thought put into it. Please keep going. It's one of the best ones I've read
Wicked story so far, keep up the good work.