War Is On The Horizon For The Kingdom Of Valon, With Refugees From The Dead World Of Earth Upon Its Lands And Its Neighbours embroiled In A War That Threatens To Spill Into Their Territory, The Future Is Looking Increasingly Grim. Mwanza Hachibambo Is The Prince Of Valon And With Unlikely Allies And Foes He Could Never Imagine, He Must Now Confront Conspiracies And Threats That Left The Realm Of Mere Mortals.
I feel like it has a unique setting and iIlike how at the start the man who had a past that even disgusts him i thought it was gonna be about his character development of a man trying to be better but I'll be honest i haven't read an interesting story from Africa in a while glad theres' more than just me, Well done
A powerful intro and some great grammar and writing skills. There is a lot of unique world building aspects I mess with in this novel as well. Good work!
author is cooking. It was better than I thought, but few corrections and spelling mistakes, author is good to go! the way author storytelling is Amazing, love it
OK, so this story is a very impressive science fantasy. The action is pretty spot-on and while there are some minor spelling and grammar errors, it is still a fantastic read. The African Comic book style character designs are interesting and extremely well done, and it is clear that there was a lot of thought and effort into creating them. The world building gives a few Asgard and Wakanda vibes but still has a unique spin without it being too overbearing. All in all, a solid novel.
The action scenes were crazily good and the novel was enjoyable do far, hope you will update more.
Gosh, we do not like fantasy. But here's a new author who seems to know how to write it. Mwari Saga is basically a war-torn book where political scheming from the past and present go hand in hand. The first few chapters depict a scarred land and some past conflicts, instantly creating a sense of "oh my gosh, this is dangerous." Mulengu has some nice action alright dialogue that allude to hidden motivations to introduce his characters. Bear in mind, this review's being written with only seven chapters released. The fanciful setting is grounded in Prince Mwanza's problems and desire for agency, while the scope is expanded with alright subplots that are likely to unfold. If you don't know what I mean, just keep an eye out for Hamanymu. For our Christian followers, we obviously can't recommend the book. But for those who are into fantasy tropes, we hope something good comes out of it if you choose to read.
This is really good stuff, brillantly written and planned. the effort put into this story leaks off the page and is impressive.
Great descriptions, amazing character designs, mc seems like he's finna lose himself later in the story, story is very unique, african type story so you already know its onna be bad@$$