Reincarnated As Naruto's Twin

Well, the initial idea of ​​the fanfic is interesting, the protagonist also has good powers. The big flaw of this fanfic is the author's writing. In terms of grammar, it's fine, but the way the author writes the story made me completely lose interest. The passage of time is poorly explained. He advanced the story without explaining anything or showing any interaction. The writing of dialogues and scenes lacks detail and is superficial. In short, this is a story without immersion. Everything is rushed in the writing. If the author improves the immersion of the fanfic, then it will be good.