"Johan Uzumaki: The Silent Monster"
Author: Writer2000
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On the night the Nine-Tails attacked, two brothers were born — one crying into the world, the other silent and watching.
Sealed with half the beast’s power each, Naruto dreams of becoming a hero.
But Johan Uzumaki, cold and unreadable, carries a darker strength the world is not ready for.
The cover image used does not belong to me. All credit goes to the original creator/owner."
*This fanfiction is written with help from ChatGPT to enhance storytelling and character depth. The ideas are mine, but AI supports the writing. If you don’t like AI-assisted content, feel free to skip it.
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Hey everyone! I’m just getting started as a new author, and I’d really appreciate your support. If you enjoyed it, please consider giving it a good rating. it really helps! And if you have any thoughts, questions, or suggestions, feel free to drop them in the comments. Thanks a lot!
"A good start to a fanfiction with potential! Johan’s character is already intriguing, and the plot promises an exciting journey ahead. Can’t wait to see where it goes!"
its a good start to a fic, just started academy after 10 chapters, but im bit surprised that the anbu following them didnt find about the chaos he spread in the orphanage.. is it gonna be one of those novels where mc is made smart by dumbing down others ?
Started reading it today looks really promising. Pacing is also good can't wait for future chapters. Johan is one of my most fav character so please don't ruin it
Well the story looks well curated by the author, not only that he is keeping up the pace in the story delivery for balancing the excitement in the reading and not getting bored real quick. I like the concept of integrating a menacing character like Johan Liebert into Naruto verse, as a fan of both the verses it's truly a bliss to read this fan fic for me. Additionally, the thing that excites me up is more than wanting Naruto to be a great shinobi and be alike Minato, I want to see what kind of wraith and devastation Johan will unleash in this universe. Keep up the good work writer, I am waiting for the arc that excites me the most.[img=recommend]
While it's off to a good start, I just want Johan to have more dialogue and interaction that shows his potential. Also, with Johan's roster, he should at least have a great deal of intelligence to quickly understand everything, such as controlling Charka and the rest. Also, if he has his knowledge, he would also have ideas on how to fight and so on. Or, since you have your ideas, remember to give him a tool or a girl who will be his unconditional tool/lover, like Karin and Tayuya, Anko. Among future ideas, it would be good if he could take advantage of using Charka's strings and puppets if he doesn't want his murders to be visible.
Yo if you are going to do backstory on his past make it short. Chapters it too much for how small the chapters are I like the story and it is good. But at this point if you chapters is this short you should just get to the point. Oh, make longer chapters.
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You must be right one incredible chap, please
The story is good, but I don't like mc character. .
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