Deus.Ex.Machina

I won't lie, at first this story seemed like another parody of a guy getting into another world where he's just a god and everyone else is just cardboard. But how wrong I was, you literally have to wait a few chapters and the plot starts to develop, introduce new characters and show their characters and significance for their own world (their connections to each other). I could write a lot more but I don't want to spoil it.

The concept and the writer's creativity are good. But he doesn't know much about the DxD world. I think he only watched the Anime and read fanfic. There are multiple logic errors, for example, mc and all the other characters are in the wrong class in the timeline, and sona and rias are in the same year as issei when they should be one class above. There's no way his family could be incredibly wealthy while having no interest in the supernatural. It is impossible for someone who has no fighting experience and doesn't know how to throw a punch to defeat the rogue demon, especially when his raw stats are weaker than the demon's (because a potion that takes 12 days to prepare shouldn't logically be able to make him go above low level. After all, in the simplest logic, a weapon with low level power should definitely take at least 10 days to manifest, and a potion that can directly put you at low level power should take many times longer than a low level weapon.) I don't think you know his strength levels, but the weakest low-level creature has at least ten times the raw stats of the average athlete. I recommend that you learn more about DxD and write in a logical and cohesive way. Despite all the negative criticism, it's generally good now 6/10, if you fix the bugs it's 7.5/10

I am 99% sure this is AI written. It's like nobody has any soul in the novel. Mc is basically has no charecter, he accepts the fact that he got reincarnated in like 2 minutes and becomes a child.

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First its a great story with its character and the plot so far(chapter 31). But the title is not right for the story. When I think of “Dues Ex Machina” it means using tech/magitech or anything tech related to become powerful. But so far its just a creation ability and he just makes typical magic story items like stuff from nasuverse/type moon and other magical worlds. Theres no cool tech stuff like mech suits, titans from warhammer, and warmachines/robots. I was hoping from reading the title to see the MC to to start from making a robot army to a emperor class titan from warhammer with a magic nulifying field. But main point is great story! Just wrong title.

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Great book. I can't wait for the sequel.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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This is an amazing dxd story honestly. The political intrigue and the emotional connection between the characters is something you can actually understand unlike other dxd stories and it shows in here.

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