The Good-for-nothing Bastard who could gain Skills by Kissing
{Author: The worst errors has been repaired and rewrited. But I'll learning more English while write, so it might still slowed my update Pace.}
An Earthling soul awakens in the ailing body of Loryarc Lapizburn, a disabled young man betrothed to the second daughter of the notorious Hallmeavan Family.
The Goddess of Kiss blesses him with a unique ability known as the [Kiss for More] System, which allows him to gain skills by kissing.
Can this new soul confront the dark secrets hidden within the Hallmeavan bloodline using his System?
What about the chaos in his predecessor's county, where the branch families are constantly at odds?
Why did the Goddess of Kiss choose him to receive this System?
Kiss, kiss, and keep kissing...
What awaits him in the end?
Anything is possible... through kisses!
The First chapter was good but After that it was a Straight downfall i thought the grammar was bearable but no, everything is just a mess and makes it such a pain to read.
This novel has massive potential but is all cut by it's horrible grammar. The author needs to hire a proper translator or needs to improve his grammar before posting any chapters. Only after reading 5 chapters i couldn't handle any more all because of the horrible English. I'm leaving this novel for some time and will come back after some time passes and then again read from chapter 1. If the grammar is still the same and the author hasn't rewritten this, I'll unfortunately drop this novel with massive potential. I hope the author takes this seriously.
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