I will erase you.
Not for the world.
But for me...
So I don’t have to remember—
The thing I chose to raise.
O Great Emperor...
May your name be forgotten forever.
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Author's Note:
Hello everyone!
This is the rewritten version of my very first novel. I've taken everything I’ve learned so far to refine the story, deepen the characters, and elevate the worldbuilding.
Thank you for joining me on this journey—I hope you enjoy the new and improved ride.
I'm only seven chapters in, but I had to leave a review because I'm really enjoying this version of the story. I liked the original, but this revision feels more polished and focused. One thing I felt was missing in the original was a clear sense of the main character's goal and mindset—but the author clearly noticed that too, and has done a great job improving it here. Overall, I’m loving the direction so far. Please don’t drop this again and keep the chapters coming![img=update][img=update]