A cunning, ruthless mafia enforcer who rose through the ranks with blood stained hands and unbreakable will. But betrayal brought his end, and death came swiftly. He expected Hell. Instead, he was reborn.
Now, in a world of devils, angels, and gods, he opens his eyes as Riser Phenex, the youngest son of the prestigious Phenex clan. With memories of his past life intact and an iron determination forged in the streets, baby Riser vows not to waste this second chance. Blessed with vast demonic power and the legendary blue flames of the Phenex bloodline, he quickly sets himself apart from other noble heirs.
But Riser isn’t content with nobility or comfort. With a mafia king’s ambition and a warrior’s spirit, he sets his sights on true greatness not just as a devil noble, but as a legend feared and respected across all factions. He builds his power, reshapes his family’s legacy, and prepares for the storms to come because in this new world, the strongest don’t rule with guns or gold, but with magic, fire, and resolve.
And Riser Phenex? He intends to rise above them all reborn not just as a devil, but as a King.
It's really good but the language is too complex for my puny little brain .
Hey everyone, I’m SQmaestro, and Rebirth In Flames is my first step into writing a fanfiction. I wanted to take a fresh spin on Riser Phenex with a what if a ruthless mafia enforcer was reborn as a noble devil with power, ambition, and the memories of his past life? This isn’t the same spoiled Riser you remember. He’s sharp, driven, and out to become more than just another noble he wants to rule like a true king. As a new author, I’m excited to share this journey with you. Thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoy the ride.
How to explain, when reading it feels too formal and mechanical.
This feels like it was written by a Chinese ai. Everything is to detailed and dramatized. Characters come off as choppy and not human. Scenes take to long to get to the point because there talking about the fires and lights outside and how rizer appearance in a different way except for his “golden sun like eyes”. Just come off as written by someone that’s not human.
Great book ambitious main character i hope it goes to dc or marvel after this