Naruto: After Unifying the Shinobi World, I Became a God
My name is Kai, and I woke up inside a time-space web made up of seven parallel Naruto worlds.
Then came the system prompt:
【Unite all seven timelines—and you’ll become a God.】
Sounds fun, right?
Luckily, I’ve got a cheat:
I can bring people from the past into the future—and show them their own fate.
So why not stir the pot a little?
I'll bring the so-called God of the Shinobi to watch his little brother's final breath; let's see how he feels then.
Let little Madara-chan witness the moment Black Zetsu-kun broke his heart.
Drag a young Hiruzen forward to watch himself fall at the hands of his beloved disciple Orochimaru.
Have Minato see how the village he died to protect treats his only son, Naruto, as nothing but a cursed child.
Let the Uchiha racist watch as how the Senju and Uchiha clans both burn to ashes.
And hey, maybe I’ll even throw in Boruto—just for laughs.
Let the brat see what a real Hokage looks like: his father, Naruto Uzumaki, in his prime during the Fourth Great Ninja War.
Because if I’m going to become a god…
I might as well make it entertaining.
The story could have been good, but unfortunately it's all disorganized, ending one chapter with the conclusion of a discussion and taking up the discussion again in the next chapter as if the previous one hadn't existed, only to end up with an almost similar conclusion. It's like reading two drafts of the same chapter one after the other, which follow each other without really being the sequel. the most striking example is from chapter 28 to 31/32, there's no coherence at all. dimension 4 :the mc looks at the village destroyed by Kyubi, then changes temporality to arrive in the same dimension 4... the MC talks with Minato and they talk about Danzo/Hiruzen/Homura/Koharu, at which point Minato speaks with an awareness of their personalities and the problems he has to solve, and in the end he comes to a conclusion thanks to the MC help. and the next chapter acts as if none of this had happened, but this time the MC talks twice about all the conversation from the previous chapter as if it hadn't taken place, and guides Minato to the same conclusion as before.
It's good, but the MC's name changed a few times, and in the last chapter the dialogue was a bit of a mess [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I’m on chapter 20 right now, and I’ve been enjoying the ride so far. The plot’s engaging, the pacing feels just right, and the updates have been pretty steady, which is a huge plus. The translation is actually pretty smooth for the most part—especially considering the translator’s still new—but there’s definitely room for growth. Some of the dialogue could be improved to sound more natural and less like it’s directly lifted from the raws, especially in emotionally heavy scenes where it feels a bit stiff or too formal. Still, the characterizations have stayed consistent and the worldbuilding keeps pulling me in. I turned a blind eye to a few early bumps because overall, it’s clear the translator really cares about delivering the story properly, and I’m looking forward to seeing how it all develops.
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