From Deadbeat noble to Top Rank Swordsman
Leon Thorne was the disgrace of his house, overweight, softspoken, and dismissed as a failure before he ever picked up a sword. Mocked during the Awakening and branded an F-rank, he was expected to fade quietly from the halls of power.
But he didn’t.
Because this wasn’t his first life.
In another timeline, Leon watched House Thorne fall, shamed, scattered and erased from history. Powerless to stop it then, he’s been given one chance to rewrite it now.
Stripped of excuses and reshaped by hardship, Leon claws his way forward—through blood, sweat and silence. Now, leaner and sharper, he enters an academy where only strength speaks and legacy decides your worth.
But Leon carries no crest. No backing. Just scars, a sword, and the will to shatter fate itself.
He’s not looking to be acknowledged or praised.
He’s going to rewrite everything.
NO MATTER WHAT IT TAKES.
Hey guys! This is my first novel, so I’d appreciate it if I could get some feedback from you, your feedback is my fuel to write more! and it’ll help me improve in where I am lacking and make corrections where necessary as well, here are some things you should know in the story 1. Leon doesn’t talk much, not because he’s cold, but because of two things, (i) he’s actually over 40 inside, meaning he’s not as young as he looks and (ii) after what happened to his family in his last life, he feels it’s his responsibility to make sure it never repeats itself in this. 2. The story would start off a bit slow, so it can focus on him doing everything he can to reduce his weight and learn some sword skills and after that it will progress well 3. I’m pouring everything into this book because as i write, i also read it and i hope you guys like it as much as i do! 4. Happy reading!